Unit Two : Use Active Voice Frequently 常用主動語氣 柯泰德網路線上科技英文論文編修訓練服務
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • Modification of the heuristics was made by Lacksonen and Enscore (1993) to solve the dynamic layout problem. • 較佳 : Lacksonen and Enscore(1993) modified the heuristics to solve the dynamic layout problem.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • Minimization of total operating costs is achieved by a planning horizon. • 較佳 : A planning horizon minimizes total operating costs.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • A description of the layout cost evaluation method is made by introducing the following notations in this section. • 較佳 : This section introduces the following notations to describe the layout cost evaluation method.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • Precise measurement of neural networks by practitioners is a heavy emphasis of computer vision systems. • 較佳 : Computer vision systems heavily emphasize that practitioners precisely measure computer vision systems.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • Numerical analysis is performed in this study on the effects of the inflation rate and the deterioration rate on stock inventory. • 較佳 : This study numerically analyzes how inflation and deterioration rates affect stock inventory.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • The manager can be assisted by the proposed model so that the order size can be precisely determined. • 較佳 : The proposed model can assist the manager in precisely determining the order size.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • The temperature is increased by uncontrollable factors, as indicated in the experimental results. • 較佳 : Experimental results indicate that uncontrollable factors increase the temperature.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • The proposed model can be extended in a future study so that more realistic assumptions can be incorporated. • 較佳 : A future study can extend the proposed model to incorporate more realistic assumptions.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • A more detailed description of the three design types is provided in Kackar and Phadke (1991). • 較佳 : Kackar and Phadke (1991) describes the three design types in more detail.
您會如何修改此文句呢 ? • The GRG algorithm may be difficult for users with limited statistical training to implement. • 較佳 : Users with limited statistical training may have difficulty in implementing the GRG algorithm.
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