My hobbies are • Riding motorbikes and mma
Music • Drum and bass / rap / hardcore / dubstep
My favouriteflims • Are green street / never back down / kidulthood / • Fast five / mrs browns boy
What I would like to be I would like to be working on muscle cars and motorbikes
I like women and air maxs
Feedback • This is a good improvement. Your audience will be able to focus on what you are telling them rather than looking at your background. • You have chosen a good background – I like it. It shows that you are thinking about keeping your audience interested. You have included a lot of good lists, but these need to be more central and away from your main image. This can be done quite simply. Add some animation to your slides. Currently this would gain you a good 5C. If you put these changes in, it would be a very good 5A. I have put in a slide at the bottom of the presentation to give you an idea of what you could achieve.
What I would like to be • Bike Mechanic • Car Mechanic