Here we go again…Step 1. Review your “pros” chart from yesterday. Add some adjectives, and add some concrete, sensory details. Find FIVE spots in your essay to develop. . Step 2.
Annie Dillard said, “All of the action on the page happens in the verbs. Verbs control when something is happening in the mind of the reader.”
Maybe, might, kind of, sometimes, it seems like…
Very, so, really, overwhelmingly….
Always, never, all the time…