Sentence Level Revision. March 21, 2011. Agenda. Quiz Review of last week Revising for clarity Incorporating elegance. Quiz. What is the difference between coherence and cohesion? Name two of the five principles for writing concisely Name two coordinating conjunctions.
The paintings at the new museum make up a great collection.
The local meat market, first opened in 1955, has provided quality service for over a decade.
What it means
They will come if you build them.
The structure could fail in harsh environments.
Call Natalie for further help or more information.
If you build them, they will come.
In harsh environments, the structure could fail.
For further help or more information, call Natalie.