Ending the Expository Rebecca Vasquez 4th Writing September 2013
Example 1 • In conclusion, I am a super swimmer, and I enjoy every minute of it. And after I go to the Olympics, I can join a swim team. Later on I could become a professional. Then when I’m ready I can go back to the Olympics.
Example 2 • Then you could tour the world buying so many expensive and nice outfits. You’re so rich that you could buy a cruise ship or a seven story mansion. Also your so famous they make a new book with your name on it. Being rich and famous is my dream and I really hope it comes true.
Example 3 • I would do anything to get the players ready for the season. I would hire wise guys just for certain players and talk to the team. I would have twenty practices a week just to get the team ready for the season. That’s why I want to be a coach.
Example 4 • The job comes with many risks, but accepting them is my only choice. Because no matter what, I want to enjoy the experience of flying.
Example 5 • Being a doctor may take some work. But when you become one, you see all the positive things people would admire you because you went through all the hardships in becoming the person you are. When I grow up, the one career I want is to be a doctor.