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Let’s look at an example from our quote exercise . Here we have quotes from the student store manager. Ted Williams, manager of the student store, says:

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Here we have quotes from the student store manager
Here we have quotes from the student store manager

  • Ted Williams, manager of the student store, says:

  • “The last 'robbery' we had was in August, 2000. And that was just a bunch of 9th graders who mistakenly tried to grab stuff as part of a hazing ritual at the school. We do not plan to beef up security. Our problems are with shoplifters, not robbers.”



So we have dombkowski s last statement
So we have with Dombkowski’s last statement

Dombkowski said he hopes citizens will call with any leads or tips.

Now HERE we want to put the manager’s comments.


But we can t just start quoting him or use a simple transition alone
But we can’t just start quoting with him or use a simple transition alone

Dombkowski said he hopes citizens will call with any leads or tips.

In the meantime, Ted Williams, manager of the student store, said, “ The last 'robbery' we had was in August, 2000. And that was just a bunch of 9th graders who mistakenly tried to grab stuff as part of a hazing ritual at the school. We do not plan to beef up security. Our problems are with shoplifters, not robbers.”


We need a complex transition between speakers
We need a complex transition between speakers with

So let’s take part of his quote, paraphrase it as our transition, and leave the rest as a direct quote.


Now we have
Now we have with

Dombkowski said he hopes citizens will call with any leads or tips.

In the meantime, Ted Williams, manager of the student store, said, the store does not plan to beef up security.

“Our problems are with shoplifters, not robbers,” Williams said.


Let s look at an example from our quote exercise

We combined a simple and with complex transition that can stand alone without the quote, and a direct quote that is said uniquely.