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The second article mentions how hard it is to readjust back to society especially if they have achieved ranking which means they have committed a lot of crimes.
They had no family but the fighters
Parents often sold their children into the service of the army.
The children were easily manipulated by the commanders because they did not have a family to take care of them. Parents often sold their children into the service of the army because they were destitute. This illustrates the idea that the child soldiers did not have a family because their family sold them to a new one.