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Enhance your writing skills with exercises on emotions, sensory details, and inner thoughts. Learn to create vivid imagery through figurative language. Preparing for vignette submission.
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Agenda 9/12/12 Update Table of Contents Exercise: Emotions and Reactions Notes: Inner Thoughts Work on Rough Draft
Announcements Last day to serve detentions before they turn into 30 mins (lunch, after school) Vignette due next Tues
Exercise: Emotions and Sensory Details Choose 3 of the 5 words listed below. Write down the words, then write down things that happen to you physically when you experience this emotion. Angry Hungry Nervous Fearful Impatient Bored **Example: Excited: heart races, sweat, headaches, knee taps, hard to be quiet
Notes: Inner Thoughts 9/12/12
Inner thoughts are NOT: Dialogue No quotation marks used Not lines that people said Summary Events that occurred
What do they add my vignette? Let’s reader inside your head Creates a fuller picture of experience you had Helps you practice and understand sensory details
How do I do that? Sensory Details Imagery Figurative Language: Similes, Metaphors Reflect on whats happening and how you are processing the moment inside your head
Examples: Sensory Details + Figurative Language Instead of: I was mad because she said that. My blood began to boil, and I could feel my heart pounding with rage. Instead of: I was hungry. My stomachs began to rumble like a volcano; I could already feel the acids eating away at my stomach lining. Instead of: It made me happy to hear someone say that. I blushed and felt the warmth of the redness displayed on my face.
Examples: Reflecting I couldn’t believe he left me. Did that mean he never cared? Did it mean he cared too much? At this point, I had to do everything I could to focus on driving. The first punch stunned me. I couldn’t believe some one else’s fist was making contact with my delicate eye. Immediately, I was blinded with pain, but had no time to think about stopping.
To do list: Vignettes Prewrite Outline Draft 1: Dialogue + Inner Thoughts If you have gmail, start typing in Google Docs Peer Edit