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Revising Your Essays

Revising Your Essays. PART III. Have Your Essays in Front of you:. Do each one of these for each one of your essays:. 7. Correct Use of Quotes. Must be used as part of a sentence The quote with the sentence must read as a complete sentence.

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Revising Your Essays

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  1. Revising Your Essays PART III

  2. Have Your Essays in Front of you: • Do each one of these for each one of your essays:

  3. 7. Correct Use of Quotes • Must be used as part of a sentence • The quote with the sentence must read as a complete sentence.

  4. Goodman Brown states that his wife is “a blessed angel” and that after that one night he would cling on to his wife and follow her to heaven” (Hawthorne para.7).

  5. Goodman Brown had recently gotten married, and states he is “a wretch am I to leave her.” (Hawthorne, 1)

  6. Goodman Brown had recently gotten married, and states he is “a wretch am I to leave her.” (Hawthorne, 1) • Goodman Brown has recently gotten married, and thinks he is “a wretch […] to leave” his wife alone at night (Hawthorne, 1).

  7. Jacqueline Shoemaker in her article, “Hawthorne’s Realm of Morality: Biographical Contexts for Young Goodman Brown,” states that Hawthorne wrote his stories involving his personal moral beliefs, including, “that all men share a brotherhood of guilt” (para. 45).

  8. In a study on the effects of immediate and delayed emotional outcomes in times of conflict, researchers argue: [h]ighly emotional events, and particularly negative emotional events, are relatively well retained, both with respect to the emotional event itself and as well as to central information in the event that elicits the emotional reaction. (Coleman, Goldman & Kugler, 9)

  9. 8. Parenthetical Citations For each story or poem • Quote (parenthetical citation) For each article, • Quote (parenthetical citation). • Summary (parenthetical citation). • Paraphrase (parenthetical citation).

  10. (Author page number) • (“First two” page number) • (Author para. Number)

  11. 9. Works Cited Hall, Cathy. “Self-Reported Aggression and the Perception of Anger in Facial Expression Photos.” The Journal of Psychology. Volume 140. Number 3. May 2006. 255-267. 11 November 2007. http://heldref-publications.metapress.com/openurl.asp?genre=article&issn=0022-3980&volume=140&issue=3&spage=255.

  12. Hall, Cathy. “Self-Reported Aggression and the Perception of Anger in Facial Expression Photos.” The Journal of Psychology. Volume 140. Number 3. May 2006. 255-267. 11 November 2007. <http://heldref-publications.metapress.com/openurl.asp?genre=article&issn=0022-3980&volume=140&issue=3&spage=255>.

  13. Hall, Cathy. “Self-Reported Aggression and the Perception of Anger in Facial Expression Photos.” The Journal of Psychology. 140.3. May 2006. 255-267. 11 November 2007. <http://heldref-publications.metapress.com/openurl.asp?genre=article&issn=0022-3980&volume=140&issue=3&spage=255>.

  14. Hawthorne, Nathaniel. “Young Goodman Brown.” Classic Short Stories. B & L Associates. 1995-2007. 12 October 2007 <http://www.classicshorts.com/stories/ygb.html>.

  15. Section IV next…..

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