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Lesson 3 Writing Strong Sentences Revising

Lesson 3 Writing Strong Sentences Revising. Objectives: To identify and correct wordiness To identify and combine choppy; rambling sentences To identify and correct tired images. 1. Eliminating Wordiness. Empty Expressions:. 2. Combining Sentences.

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Lesson 3 Writing Strong Sentences Revising

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  1. Lesson 3Writing Strong SentencesRevising Objectives: To identify and correct wordiness To identify and combine choppy; rambling sentences To identify and correct tired images

  2. 1. Eliminating Wordiness Empty Expressions:

  3. 2. Combining Sentences • Combine short, choppy sentences into longer ones

  4. **Do not use CONJUNCTIONS (and, but, or, etc.)**

  5. **Add information to the subject (appositive phrase)**

  6. **Do not start the sentence with the subject**

  7. Coordinating Sentences When two sentences are of equal importance, bring them together with one of the following:

  8. Similarity, Contrast, or Result?

  9. Similarity

  10. Similarity, Contrast, or Result?

  11. Similarity

  12. Similarity, Contrast, or Result?

  13. Similarity

  14. Similarity, Contrast, or Result?

  15. Contrast & Result

  16. Similarity, Contrast, or Result

  17. Contrast

  18. Similar, Contrast, or Result?

  19. Result

  20. 3. Refreshing Tired Images Cliches--an overused expression or idea.

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