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Fish Failure

Fish Failure. “Ms. Sandler, come quick!” exclaimed Darren. “The fish is caught in the filter!” “It is?” I asked puzzled. “We don’t know how to stop the filter,” Darren said. Without thinking I pulled the plug from the wall. Adding Details to Show Not Tell.

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Fish Failure

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  1. Fish Failure “Ms. Sandler, come quick!” exclaimed Darren. “The fish is caught in the filter!” “It is?” I asked puzzled. “We don’t know how to stop the filter,” Darren said. Without thinking I pulled the plug from the wall.

  2. Adding Details to Show Not Tell “Ms. Sandler, come quick!” exclaimed Darren. “The fish is caught in the filter!” “It is?” I asked puzzled. “We don’t know how to stop the filter,” Darren said. Without thinking I pulled the plug from the wall. What does he mean? Then I saw it There was the fish hanging upside down from the filter by its tail. It was one of the cute black, bobble-eyed fish too. I stood there for a split second thinking I didn’t know how to stop it either. The filter gurgled and then stopped. The fish drifted down to the bottom of the tank.

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