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Lifting HSC performance Karen Yager

Lifting HSC performance Karen Yager. Metacognition.

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Lifting HSC performance Karen Yager

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  1. Lifting HSC performanceKaren Yager

  2. Metacognition ‘If our aim is to improve student performance, not just measure it, we must ensure that students know the performances expected of them, the standards against which they will be judged, and have opportunities to learn from the assessment in future assessments’(Wiggins, 2002).

  3. Importance of Feedback • “An expert teacher, mentor or coach can readily explain, demonstrate and detect flaws in performance. He or she can also identify talent and potential, and build on these. In contrast, trial and error learning or poor teaching are less effective and take longer. If performance flaws are not detected and corrected, these can become ingrained and will be much harder to eradicate later. Learners who don’t receive instruction, encouragement and correction can become disillusioned and quit due to lack of progress” (Dinham, Feedback on Feedback, 2008).

  4. Effective Feedback • Precise • Strategic • Timely • Frequent (Holmes & Papageourgiou, 2009) • Encourages students to make the difference and do resubmits • ‘Insert word’ • Using the data

  5. Key Ingredients • Focussing on the key concepts and demands of the rubrics • Notes from the Marking Centre • Annotated exemplar responses • Practice, practice, practice…..

  6. AREA OF STUDY BELONGING

  7. Context & Perspectives: personal, cultural, historical, social Context & Perspectives: personal, cultural, historical, social Assumptions about belonging Meaning Meaning Meaning Meaning Meaning Composer Text Responder Meaning Meaning Meaning Perceptions:interplay of recognition and interpretation and is influenced by our preconceived ideas, memories, experiences and senses Perceptions:interplay of recognition and interpretation and is influenced by our preconceived ideas, memories, experiences and senses Representation of belonging through language features and ideas Meaning

  8. The Concept of Belonging • How do you view the notion of belonging? • Do the texts invite you to belong to their worlds? • How do the texts represent the concept of belonging? • How does your perception and assumptions about belonging compare with that of the composers you are studying? • Has your perspective been challenged or altered? • What lines of argument have you developed as a result?

  9. The Concepts • Representation: You need to explore, critically analyse and evaluate why and how the texts have used textual features and forms to shape meaning and influence responses. • Contextualisation: How your personal, cultural, social and historical context affects your perspective of belonging. Integrate the significant aspects of context throughout your response. • Interrelationships:You need to find other texts that enable you to make meaningful connections with your prescribed text. These texts of your own choosing should support and challenge how your prescribed text represents belonging ensuring that you can develop a range of informed theses or lines of argument.

  10. The Concepts • Perceptions: You must take into consideration the composers’ contexts and your own context to appreciate how they interpret belonging and how you respond to this perception of belonging. Perception refers to the interplay of recognition and interpretation and is influenced by our preconceived ideas, memories, experiences and senses. It can alter and even distort how we view the notion of belonging.

  11. Section 1: Reading Task • “Strong responses demonstrated perception and insight into the ideas embedded in the texts and supported a thesis with effective textual evidence.” • “Weaker responses simply described the content of either the written or visual without linking them” • “A discussion which focused primarily on language techniques often restricted the candidates’ opportunity to demonstrate their understanding of the ideas in the texts or to develop their ideas effectively”

  12. Reading Task The ideas! Composer’s purpose and attitude towards belonging How language features, form and structure represent belonging How students personally respond to the texts

  13. Section 1: Reading Task • How the composer shapes understanding of and the response to the concept of ‘Belonging’ • Identify the feature • Exemplify the feature • Explain the impact of the feature • Extrapolate by discussing why the composer used the feature

  14. Tactics • Highlighting • Overarching theme • Final question: • Concept driven • Line of argument in first topic sentence • Synthesis • Mini-essay • End with an evaluative statement

  15. Imaginative Writing • Writing is a craft that can be learned and transformed to become artistry! • Explicitly focus on the craft and artistry!

  16. Section II: Notes from Marking Centre • ‘They demonstrated structural complexity, cohesion, the use of an authentic, sustained and engaging voice…mechanics of language, punctuation, sentence structure and paragraphing were applied skillfully in these responses’ 2007 Feedback. • ‘They explored the ways relationships contribute to a sense of belonging with insight, complexity and/or subtlety. These responses displayed originality and artistryand the mechanics of language were applied skillfully’ 2009 Notes from the Marking Centre.

  17. Feedforward • Cohesion: • The idea • Setting • Motif or extended metaphor • Voice: • Writing from experience • Word choice • Characterisation

  18. Feedforward • Subtlety: • Tension • Ambivalence • Voice: • Writing from experience • Word choice

  19. Feedforward • Mechanics: • Syntax: varying length and beginnings • Imagery: figurative devices/synathaesia • Sound: euphony, discordance, disruption • Verbs not adjectivous

  20. There’s a nothingness on the horizon that watches and waits. Nothing. I turn around and look back at the empty beach. There is no other place I want to be. I see a set coming. Digging deep into the ocean I gain speed and push my way onto the wave. A great force pushes me on and on. A huge rush of adrenalin kicks in as I stand up and fly down the glassy face. For that split second nothing else matters. No thoughts in my mind about school or my future or anything. All that matters is here on this wave. I don’t care what will come next…

  21. Activities • Flash fiction – 50 words with a motif and key idea • The senses • Recording writing • 12 word novels • A newspaper headline or recent event • Using writers to model effective writing: http://www.randomhouse.co.uk/vintage/offthepage/extracts.htm

  22. Section III: Extended Response Must demonstrate understanding of key concepts and ideas of belonging from the rubrics and through the response to the texts Develop theses or lines of argument Choose texts that connect with concepts

  23. Notes from the Marking Centre • Candidates who clearly understood the purpose of their texts were able to demonstrate conceptual understanding and respond personally. • High-range responses … displayed an ability to evaluate and analyse. • Better responses developed a thesis which demonstrated a strong conceptual understanding.

  24. HSC Examination Rubrics In your answer you will be assessed on how well you: • demonstrate understanding of the concept of belonging in the context of your study • analyse, explain and assess the ways belonging is represented in a variety of texts • organise, develop and express ideas using language appropriate to audience, purpose and context

  25. Extended Responses • Conceptual understanding: • The thesis or line of argument • In response to the question • The framework and drivers for extended responses • Integrates the response • Support and challenge

  26. Developing a Thesis • Strong opening paragraphs that introduce clear lines of argument or theses that directly address the question. • A response that is driven by a thesis connected to the question. Each successive point must further the thesis through textual analysis and support. Support or even challenge then thesis through the analysis of the text/s. • Precise topic sentences that are connected to and build on the thesis.

  27. Developing a Thesis • Judicious textual support: Detailed, relevant examples from the text/s rather than spurious, shallow examples. • Supporting the analysis of language features with examples from the text/s and evaluating their impact on the responder. Never a shopping list of techniques!

  28. Developing a Thesis • “from hour to hour we ripe and ripe,then from hour to hour we rot and rot“ (Touchstone, II.vi.). • When developing theses students should consider that the notion of belonging is never fixed. It is constantly shifting depending on the individual’s experiences, emotional state and relationships with self and others. • They need to consider how humanity’s flaws and qualities challenge and enrich belonging. • Regard belonging as an ambivalent notion. Explore when and why individuals move between belonging, indifference and alienation.

  29. Theses • Overarching through the question to specific lines of arguments. • Supporting the thesis with the reasons why the student has arrived at this point of view. • At least two – three supporting arguments used to further the thesis that addresses the question in the essay. • E.g. The greatest barrier to belonging is the self: our perceptions, assumptions and degree of self-efficacy.

  30. Feelings of belonging are constantly changing due to societal pressures and expectations. Some individuals choose to change personally to conform and belong or to stand alone. This concept of belonging is conveyed through the representations of people and their relationships with others and the larger world in the play The Crucible and the film Social Network. Strong individuals choose not to belong to a society to preserve their individual and professional identity, and this can either enrich or challenge the values of a community or group.

  31. An individual may choose or be forced to not belong to society in order to preserve their identity and core values. Belonging is such an innate driving force, yet some individuals such as John Proctor in The Crucible because of a repressive and tragic context deliberately suppress this drive and choose alienation from society to find a more acceptable way to belong spiritually, ethically and morally to family, friends and self.

  32. Integration • Making connections between the texts through: • The thesis • Characters • The act of representation • Connecting words: Furthermore, alternatively…

  33. Lines of Arguments • We spend our lives trying to belong to self, a place and others, not realising that it is our perceptions and attitudes that enable us to belong. • When we begin to understand the forces that drive us to belong we develop empathy for others and personal insight. • The simple act of unquestioning friendship and kindness nurtures the notion of belonging. • When individuals experience a strong connection to a place the notion of belonging is strengthened and enriched.

  34. Ideas • The pressure to belong and conform has the potential to threaten individuality and independent thought. • Belonging to a community or a group is not always a positive thing. To maintain the cohesion, power and authority of the community or group, individuals could be forced to conform and suppress their individuality. Freedom and independence can become casualties of conformity.

  35. Theses • We all need to find a community where we belong and we are accepted. • A strong sense of identity ensures that an individual can deal with challenging circumstances. • Belonging may be a fundamental human need but it also a choice: “I thank you for your company, but, good faith, I had as lief havebeen myself alone.”

  36. Suggested Approach • Paragraph 1: Immediately address the question and introduce the thesis or line of argument that challenges or supports it. Provide at least one or two supporting arguments through an explanation of the thesis. • Paragraph 2: Connect to the question and the thesis using a topic sentence. Then connect to the prescribed text by discussing whether the text supports or challenges the question. Briefly discuss the significance of the composer’s context and times, and his or her perspectives, and how these influence the text’s representation of belonging and the underlying assumptions of the text about belonging. Context can be integrated through out the analysis of a text.

  37. Suggested Approach • Paragraphs 3 - 5: Connect the topic sentence to the previous paragraph and build on the thesis. Use the question and the associated thesis or line of argument to discuss those aspects of the text that are relevant. Integrate an analysis of the textual features and details that conveybelonging. Use quotes from the text, but don’t use lengthy quotes that are not explained or linked to your discussion. Make connections with one or more of the other texts through the thesis, characters’ responses to belonging or language features used to represent belonging.

  38. Texts of own Choosing • Discerning choice of related material that enhance and strengthen the argument through subtle comparison or stark contrast. • Enable the student to support and challenge the theses or lines of argument • Discuss the textual features with confidence and ease Way Home – Libby Hathorn

  39. Related Texts • One Night the Moon: Prejudice destroys all hope of a family being reunited. • Beneath Clouds: A community divided by racism. • The Island: Unquestioning conformity and mob rule in its most ugly and destructive form. • Children of Men: Dystopian film where Britain has become monocultural.

  40. Related Texts • Catcher in the Rye: Holden chooses alienation because of the phoniness of others. • Jasper Jones – Craig Silvey: ‘I think Jasper Jones speaks the truth in a community of liars.’ • TS.Eliot: ‘The Waste Land’ • Tim Winton: The Turning – short stories

  41. Related Texts • Social Network: How relationships strengthen and challenge the notion of belonging. • Diddy Dirty: “Coming Home”- ‘we back cruising through Harlem, Viso blocksit’s what made me, saved me, drove me crazydrove me away than embraced meforgave me for all of my shortcomingswelcome to my homecoming’

  42. Resources To access a range of essay questions visit: • http://tutortales.wordpress.com/2009/07/16/practice-questions-for-area-of-study-belonging/#more-196 To find suggested texts of own choosing visit: • http://www.the-chimaera.com/May2008/Theme/Preface.html • http://www.insidebreak.org.au/belonging/ • http://hscbelonging.wordpress.com/2009/12/01/belonging-to-a-place/

  43. Support • Mind maps • Comparison/contrast tables • Generic responses and then spotlighting • Timed opening paragraphs • Topic sentences • Connecting paragraphs

  44. Module A: Texts in Time Frankenstein and Blade Runner

  45. "Art at its most significant is a distant early warning system that canalways be relied on to tell the old culture what is beginning to happen” Marshall McLuhan. Both texts explore a dilemma that continues to resonate in the 21st century: the ethical and moral tension between the fear of humanity’s abuse of technology because of our inherent flaws such as ambition, ego, pride and greed, and the incredible potential for technology to extend life and even defy death. ‘What piece of work is a man?’.

  46. HSC Rubric In your answer you will be assessed on how well you: • demonstrate understanding of the meanings of a pair of texts when considered together • evaluate the relationships between texts and contexts • organise, develop and express ideas using language appropriate to audience, purpose and form

  47. HSC Feedback • “These responses embedded an evaluation of the relationship between text and context in the analysis of the texts” • “incorporated an analysis of the ways in which a comparative study invited deeper understanding of the concepts suggested by the question” • “clear understanding of how context influenced the values and ideas in both texts”

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