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Sentence Skills

Sentence Skills. Unit 6 Sentence Combining Sentence Unity and Coherence. Sentence Combining: 1. Coordination : being of equal importance 2. Subordination : being of less importance.

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Sentence Skills

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  1. Sentence Skills Unit 6 Sentence Combining Sentence Unity and Coherence

  2. Sentence Combining: 1. Coordination: being of equal importance 2. Subordination : being of less importance

  3. Coordinationconnects two or more sentence elements (words, phrases, and clauses) that have the same grammatical function.

  4. For instance: a. I walkedslowly and silently to town. b. We decided not to go to class. We planned to get the notes. Everyone else had the same plan. Most of us ended up failing the quiz. We decided not to go to class, but we planned to get the notes. Everyone else had the same plan, so most of us ended up failing the quiz.

  5. Subordinationputs less important ideas in a dependent clause or phrase and the more important idea in an independent clause. For instance: As soon as he arrived at the hotel, he began to write to his girl friend.

  6. 3. Misuse of Coordination and Subordination (1) Illogical coordination Illogical: Alice Adams has published four novels, and she lives in San Francisco. Revised: Alice Adams, who lives in San Francisco, has published four novels. [Dependent clause] Alice Adams, from San Francisco, has published four novels. [Modifying phrase]

  7. (2) Illogical subordination Illogical: Because he was deaf when he wrote them, Beethoven’s final symphonies were masterpieces. Revised: Although Beethoven was deaf when he wrote his final symphonies, they are musical masterpieces.

  8. Sentence Unity Ⅰ. What is sentence unity? Sentence unity means that only one idea or thought can be expressed in one single sentence. Unity refers to two qualities: there is only one main idea in a sentence, and that idea is complete.

  9. For instance: He died in a traffic accident, and he had just reached the age of 73. (ineffective) He died in a traffic accident just afterhe had reached the age of 73.

  10. Tips: 1. Change the sentence structure in order to make the hidden relation clear and bring unity to the sentence. 2. If a close relation can not be built in one sentence, change the sentence into two or more sentences.

  11. Ⅱ.Put related thoughts into a sentence Unrelated: Yesterday Tom has hurt his foot, and he could not find his new bicycle. Related: Accident happening all day yesterday, Tom not only hurt his foot but also lost his new bicycle.

  12. Ⅲ. Eliminating excessive detail Awkward: In 1788, when Andrew Jackson, then a young man of twenty-one years who had been living in the Carolinas, still a virgin country, came into Tennessee, the turbulent place of unknown opportunities, to enforce the law as the new prosecuting attorney, he had the qualifications that would make him equal to the task.

  13. Revised:In 1788, when Andrew Jackson came into Tennessee as the new prosecuting attorney, he had the necessary qualifications for the task.

  14. Sentence Coherence Ⅰ. The subject must be connected in meaning with its predicate. Incoherent: A comparison between the city and the town would be the ideal place to live. Improved: A community that offered the best qualities of both city and town would be the ideal place to live.

  15. Ⅱ.All comparisons should be complete and logical 1. State a comparison fully enough to ensure clarity For instance: Tom likes bowling better than Jane. (Misleading) Tom likes bowling better than Jane likes bowling. Tom likes bowling better than he likes Jane.

  16. 2. Be sure that the items being compared are really comparable Illogical: Her English is much better than I. Revised: Her English is much better than mine.

  17. 3. Avoid comparisons that do not state what is being compared Incoherent: Brand X gets clothes whiter. [Whiter than what?] Coherent: Brand X gets clothes whiter than Brand Y does. Incoherent: Brand A is so much better. [Better than what?] Coherent: Brand A is so much better than Brand B.

  18. Ⅲ. All modifiers should clearly modify the intended word 1. Place a limiting adverb immediately before the word it modifies For instance: I hit him in the eye onlyyesterday. [time of the action] I only hit him in the eye yesterday. [the action] I hit him only in the eye yesterday. [the position]

  19. 2. Avoid ambiguous modifiers Misplaced: The student Mr. Smith criticized angrily left the room. Revised: The student Mr. Smithangrily criticized left the room. Or: The student Mr. Smith criticized left the room angrily.

  20. 3. Avoid separating the parts of a verb phrase or the parts of an infinitive Awkward: Many students had, by spending most of their time on the assignment, completed it. Revised: By spending most of their time on the assignment, many students had completed it.

  21. 4. Dangling modifiers should be avoided A dangling modifier is a group of words which does not modify a correct word or no word at all. Most often, a dangling modifier does not correctly refer to the subject of the sentence.

  22. For instance: On entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, “Good morning!” On entering the classroom, the teacher was greeted by the students, who stood up and said, “Good morning!

  23. Exercises: 1. Revise the following sentences so that they are logical and clear. (1) I get along with my parents better than my sister. (2) His tip was larger than any customer I ever waited on. (3) A teacher’s income is generally lower than a doctor. (4) Lying in the hospital bed, my mind began to develop fearful fantasies. (5) Bill nearly finished the entire meal in five minutes. (6) Most children have by the time they are seven lost a tooth. (7) The computer needs repair in the library. (8)By turning the lights down, the room looked less dingy.

  24. 2. Sentence-combining 1. He would trudge (蹒跚地走)into the classroom. He would be late. This was habitual. He would be unshaven. He wore a blue beach shirt. He wore seersucker(泡泡纱)pants. He wore no socks. He wore a pair of sandals.(便鞋) 2. He would drag himself to the center of the room. He would drop his attaché case (公文包) on the desk. He would call the roll. He never smiled. He never said good morning.

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