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In this email to the editor, Wooyoung Kim, a Junior at Seokyeong University studying International Business Languages, expresses a clear opinion on the Seoul ban on Japanese food imports. The email presents examples and support for the opinion, while ensuring sentences are interconnected. It showcases a variety of vocabulary and correct spelling, ending with a final thought. The language is formal, concise, and avoids whiny statements. Each paragraph serves a distinct purpose, maintaining proper tenses throughout. The email outlines the necessity of workplace email etiquette, group collaboration, and encourages bilingual responses for an effective discussion.
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LTTE Edit/self • Dear Editor • To the Editor, • Re “Seoul Ban on Japanese Food Imports” Oct 12. • Clear opinion in opening • Examples, support; join sentences? • Variety of vocabulary? spelling • Final thought • Kim, Wooyoung • email? • Seokyeong University Junior • Dept. of International Business Languages • by Sunday Nov 3
Grrrr email!/self/peer • Each paragraph has a purpose? • 1 • 2 • 3 • 4 • Format • Formal expressions • Concise? No whiney statements! • Tenses? • If……, I will have to
workplace email/group • groups • group leader • read each question and get all answers • you can use Korean and English • p. 48 #1 • p. 48 #2 • answers on p. 104 • p. 49 #3 make notes then write email!
HW • Check wiki!
