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Unit 1 Assessment Feedback. Formal Formative Assessment. General Feedback. Pre-write until it hurts Follow directions… If the question asks you to base your response on the question before…make sure your answers jive Most points were lost for this reason

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unit 1 assessment feedback

Unit 1 Assessment Feedback

Formal Formative Assessment

general feedback
General Feedback
  • Pre-write until it hurts
  • Follow directions…
    • If the question asks you to base your response on the question before…make sure your answers jive
  • Most points were lost for this reason
  • Needed to nail the characteristics for a 5 in order to get it
  • Couldn’t just have 4 poorly explained specific examples
be on time or early
Be on Time or Early
  • Block 1: 9/20- 45%
  • Block 3: 10/21- 48%
  • Block 4: 13/19- 68 %
  • Block 5: 10/20- 50%
  • Follow Directions and turn your work in.
question 3
Question 3
  • Yes, what the Nazis did was horrible
    • They are guilty
  • However, punishment is based on ID formation, not the fact that they are guilty
paragraph structure
Paragraph Structure
  • Topic sentence, make sure it relates back to argument
  • Evidence, multiple examples (elevated examples from class)
  • Conclusion, explain importance of what you just said
specifically
Specifically..
  • The most effective paragraphs
    • Explained the context
      • Said which type of individual came from this society
      • How the individual turned out
    • Concluding sentence was related back to argument and stated importance of the paragraph
  • Example: Clearly, Andrew Carnegie overcame his difficult context and improved his life as well as the lives of many other Americans. Thus, individuals form their own identity.
transitions
Transitions
  • Words are effective
    • Then, next, Second
  • Sentences are even better!
    • Just like Adolf Hitler, Vlad the Imapler had a difficult childhood and formed his own identity.
    • Likewise, Charles Manson formed his own identity despite his surroundings in 1960s America.
grammar
Grammar
  • No Comma Splices!
    • Don’t join two complete sentences by a comma
  • Andrew Carnegie went to the steel mill, he was a busy man.
    • Andrew Carnegie went to the steel mill; he was a busy man.
    • Andrew Carnegie went to the steel mill and he was a busy man
spelling
Spelling
  • Nazi not Natzi (sounding it out doesn’t help you here)
  • Their, there, and they’re
  • 1960s, Nazis
    • Not 1960’s or Nazi’s
    • Unless you mean possession
  • Don’t use I, we, you, your
  • Be formal
concluding paragraphs
Concluding Paragraphs
  • Rephrase your argument
  • Tell me why your thesis is important, why this answer matters
  • Example: If individuals don’t control their identity formation, they can’t be found guilty for crimes committed.
where to go for help
Where to go for help…
  • Mr. McLaughlin
  • Dr. Mordente
  • Writing books
  • Block 1: Catherine Barna
    • Paragraph Structure
  • Block 3: Josh Gelber
    • Detail Selection
  • Block 4: Gio Czarecki
    • Phrasing
  • Block 5: Gabby Mund
    • Example Integration