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Dive into a suspenseful short story geared towards Australian teen readers, filled with atmosphere, diverse settings, and teen protagonists facing threats from nature, animals, and humans. Dive into a suspenseful short story, aimed at Australian teen readers. Follow brave teen protagonists as they encounter various sources of threat and experience partial resolutions in a thrilling narrative that keeps you on the edge of your seat. Improve your writing by creating empathy, incorporating threats, and building suspense to create a captivating page-turner that engages the reader.
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Feedback: Assessment 3 Suspenseful short story aimed at Australian teen readers
Marks • Range: 7/20 – 20/20 • Average 14.8
Strengths • Atmosphere as part of creating suspense • Settings as part of creating suspense • Use of teen protagonists • Sources of threat: natural, animal, human • Partial resolutions – very satisfying!
Always remember: in any genre … in any story … for any audience … Empathy + Threat + Delay = Suspense … = a page-turner = an engaged reader!