1. Peer Review College Application Essay

2. MATERIALS NEEDED • RED pen or colored pencil • YELLOW highlighter • BLUE pen or colored pencil • GREEN highlighter

3. ROUND 1 • POSITIVE READ • Read the essay • Provide POSITIVE feedback • What did you like about the essay?

4. ROUND 2 • SPELLING • Use a pen or colored pencil • Note all misspellings • Use a dictionary / smart phone as necessary red

5. ROUND 3 • Read the first few lines • Does the HOOK grab your attention? • If not, give suggestions for improvement • Does the INTRODUCTION provide necessary background information so that you “get” what is going on? • If not, give suggestions for improvement

6. ROUND 4 • SMILEY FACE TRICKS • Use a to indicate ALL of the Smiley Face Tricks highlighter

7. ROUND 5 BLUE • Using a pen or colored pencil, mark the following errors: • Punctuation • Grammar • Consistent verb tense? • Subject / verb agreement?

8. ROUND 6 • CONCLUSION / LESSON • the CONCLUSION of the essay • At the end of the essay, write a sentence that summarizes the LESSON learned Highlight