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  1. Writing Introductions and Conclusions

  2. Introductions: How do I Open? • Quote (from a celebrity or well-known individual) • Story • Background Information • ALWAYS ENDS WITH YOUR THESIS STATEMENT, WHICH IS ONE SENTENCE THAT SUMS UP YOUR ENTIRE PAPER

  3. Do not do this as an introduction: • I am strongly against your proposal for required homework in every class for many good reasons. Some of these reasons are that there is too much homework already, kids want to have fun in school, and finally, everyone would have to work harder. I will begin by telling you why I think we have too much homework.

  4. Intro Ideas • Scenario / Anecdote : the writer provides hypothetical or personal examples to illustrate the topic . • Inquiry / Questioning: the writer asks thought-provoking, maybe even edgy, questions to capture the reader’s interest. • Preparatory Definition / Explanation: the writer defines or explains the subject before discussing it in detail.

  5. Sample One • Who in their right mind thought that high school students should get up in the dark when their natural rhythm is just the opposite? Who in their right mind would put the most inexperienced drivers on the road before the sun is even up? What parents in their right minds would sign up for a morning fight 180 days a year? What teacher in his or her right mind would want to motivate a somnambulant first period class? Only someone who is actually in their right mind would move the start time of high school to a sensible 10 am.

  6. Sample two • The majority of high schools have kept a starting time that was begun in the 1920’s when students needed to get back to their farms to tend to chores. This means that class still starts at 7:30 am, which current research proves is the worst time for the teen mind. Why then do we continue to use a system that we know doesn’t work well for the very students that the school is trying to teach? To ensure student success, we must change our schedule to start school at 10 am.

  7. Sample three • It is 5:45 a.m. Time to get up. “Mom, just a little longer,” I beg. Six o’clock rolls around; time to get up. “ OK Mom, I am getting up,” I say as my eyes drift back shut. It is now 6:25 and I spring up out of bed and try to get ready in time to leave at 7:00. Skipping breakfast, a mistake I will regret later, this is my typical morning. So, as a high school student I know the concerns that people have expressed about the starting time for school. School starts too early and I agree it should be started later and held an equal time longer.

  8. Sample Four • Today the cell phone is considered a prerequisite for becoming a teenager. The sound of a ring or a buzz has become normal and is often dismissed as nothing. Some schools however are taking a stand against the wireless device. Schools in New York often use metal detectors not only to catch knives and guns but also cell phones. The cell phone has had nothing but a bad influence in schools because many students use them to cheat on tests, text during class, or take inappropriate pictures in the locker room. Revised draft The class is silently taking a test and every student is concentrating for the last few precious moments. Suddenly the theme song from the O.C. comes on. Every child’s head is turned to the noise; the blushing student says sorry and hurriedly turns his phone to vibrate. The teacher then collects the papers even though many have blanks at the bottom. Allowing cell phones in schools is just another nuisance many students would love to do without.

  9. Sample five • Cell phones have become more and more frequently used in our modern and technologically advanced lives. Many people, mostly men and women from older generations, become quite annoyed when someone whips out their cell phone in a public place or right in the middle of a personal conversation. But when cell phones are used at appropriate times and for appropriate purposes, they make our lives so much more convenient. Cell phones should be left to use in the hands of Lawrence Public school students during school under the right guidelines. Cell phones provide easy communication between students in making after school arrangements and for medical and safety purposes. Revised draft “ Ring! Ring!” Suzy Sophomore reaches into her purse to find her pink Razor. “Goodness, I’m so sorry; I thought I turned this thing off.” Everyone’s eyes divert to Suzy as some of the other students snicker and Mr. Nelson rolls his eyes, waiting impatiently. Mr. Nelson casually strides over to Suzy’s desk and takes away the phone for the rest of the period. This has happened twice today in his class, and he is becoming quite agitated for this interruption during his lesson. Instances such as these occur frequently in Lawrence Public Schools. Having a “No cell phone on school grounds” policy would prevent these occurrences and would benefit students and teachers greatly.

  10. Conclusion: It’s a wrap! • Refer back to the story, problem, question, or quote that began the introduction • Emphasize the important points: remind the reader of the essay’s thesis and how major details developed • Clearly connects introduction and body of the paper • Gives a sense of completion • Does more than restate your arguments and position • Gives the reader something to think about

  11. conclusions • Call to Action : the writer implores the audience to change. • Offer a Solution: the writer suggests some possibilities to resolve the problem posed. • Make a Prediction : similar to a startling statement, this can be a warning or an encouragement.

  12. Ineffective Conclusion: do not do this! • I have given you three truthful explanations of why daily homework is an abomination to the high school. This is due to problems with participants in after school events, the time we spend with our families, and our jobs. Thank you for allowing me to express my feelings.

  13. Call to Action • Include a final appeal to reinforce your argument. Clearly and forcefully state your desired action. Give information needed to take that recommended action.

  14. Call to action example • Daily mandatory homework for high school students would serve no real worthwhile purpose but to unnecessarily stress out students and teachers alike. Teachers and students are busy, stressed, preoccupied, and quite frankly, strung-out enough as it is without this. Please, I urge you not to put this in effect. Not simply because I don’t want homework for all seven classes every day, but because it would truly be detrimental to everyone actively participating in the public school now and in the future.

  15. Offer a solution • Restate the problem. Define and develop the solution. Focus on the strengths of the solution. This strategy differs from a call to action. More of a recommendation Stresses the solution to a problem

  16. Offer a solution example • According to high schools with the highest test scores across the country, homework is only necessary when an individual student doesn’t understand a concept, or needs additional practice. Therefore, mandatory homework in every class would be meaningless. Instead, teachers should assign homework on an individual basis. This solution would provide students with needed practice, without needless busywork for students, and endless grading for teachers. When students work on just their own weaknesses, rather than work assigned to the whole class, they will quickly see improvement and will be more motivated to stay in school.

  17. Make a Prediction • Takes the argument a step further than a summary Keeps the reader thinking after reading your essay Is based on the main points (arguments), creating joy, hope, gloom, suspense, etc. Draws reader’s attention to the significance of the argument

  18. Make a Prediction – student sample • Imagine an empty classroom. As students trickle in, without a word, they immediately take out a piece of paper and a pencil to start writing down today’s homework assignment. The teacher walks to the front of the class to admire her focused students as they work silently. Ring! Class is in session. We can make this longed-for dream a reality. Our high school’s motto has always been “Be the Best You Can Be” and if the required homework proposal is implemented, we really would be.