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Effective Business Writing December 5, 2007 Calgary City Hall Tom McLaughlin

Effective Business Writing December 5, 2007 Calgary City Hall Tom McLaughlin b-admin, mct , mcse , mcsa , mcp , a+, n+, s+ tom@tomax7.com. Agenda. Overview Writing an email Internal Announcements Responding Positively and Negatively Business letters Persuasion and Summary

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Effective Business Writing December 5, 2007 Calgary City Hall Tom McLaughlin

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  1. Effective Business Writing December 5, 2007 Calgary City Hall Tom McLaughlin b-admin, mct, mcse, mcsa, mcp, a+, n+, s+ tom@tomax7.com

  2. Agenda • Overview • Writing an email • Internal Announcements • Responding Positively and Negatively • Business letters • Persuasion and Summary • Breaks/Lunch

  3. Email things that annoy me… • 1 • 2 • 3 • 4 • 5

  4. Yep, you’re right • USING ALL CAPTIALS ISN’T TOO BRIGHT. • or 600 of these!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! • Wandering all over the place with run-on sentences really doesn’t keep my attention or get any action but after trying to figure what you were saying in three hours what most would have done in five words, so I gave up, but then again I am being paid by the hour so talk on because I can listen you drone on and

  5. Basic Rules • Rule #1 – You don’t know or have control where your email will end up, so be careful. • Rule #2 – What goes around, comes around, so treat others as you would like to be treated. • Rule #3 – I like fat on my steak not in my IM or email, so cut to the chase please.

  6. Some pointers • Don’t ramble on, I got work to do, respect it. • Tone in email, is it authoritative, passive, or whiny? • Use “we” when trying to encourage participation from others in the team. • Avoid technical jargon for non-tecky users.

  7. Organize Your Thoughts • Time-Sequenced – chronological. • Compare and Contrast– nothing new under the sun. • Cause and Effect – back to the future. • Problem Solution – divide and conquer. • Blueprint – follow the leader.

  8. More Thoughts • Know your target audience – demographic, department, pecking order and terms. • Offer a solution - if needed. • Criticism, while good, should be left for the critics. • Always, always, end politely! Read: no mush.

  9. Where does it go? • Who receives it directly, CC or BCC. • Corporate Culture. • Class, Ethnicity and Gender. • Their level of comprehension. • Don’t Patronize. • And remember your message doesn’t END with SEND! (…with apologies to the rap song “Don’t copy that floppy”)

  10. Brainstorming • Problem-solution – data/conclusion/proposal • Journalistic approach – who/what/where…W5 • Question-Answer – Devils advocate • Storytelling – put ideas into a coherent stream • Page 69.

  11. ACTIVITY #1– Group 10 mins Organize Your Thoughts • You need to procure a new Windows or Linux Server for the XYZ department. • Management is on a tight budget and needs to be made aware Server1 is going to crash soon. • Using a certain OS would save money or be hard to implement.

  12. Voices in my head • Active Voice: Less formal and easier to determine who’s doing what. “You did not fill out the correct forms, so we denied your request.” • Passive Voice: Indicates action is taken while avoiding any mention who performed it “After careful consideration, your request for a new server has been denied.”

  13. Open Ended Questions • Ask a question and let the reader give you their answer. • How may/can I help you? • Where have you looked already? • What aspect are you looking for? • What kind of information are you looking for?

  14. Closed Ended Questions • Closed ended questions are questions, which can be answered by either a “yes” or a “no.” • Can I help you? • Can you describe the kind of information? • Is there any other information you need? • Does this answer your question?

  15. Instant Messaging Blackberry, Palm Pilot, Yahoo and MSN Chat. • Verify IM/BB is the appropriate medium. • Follow the rules for IM etiquette. • Be brief and use one screen at a time. • Set device to busy after a certain time. • End a conversation courteously.

  16. Internal Announcements Much business writing and announcements is designed for an internal audience. • Open with the main idea, • Provide any details necessary to convince, • Limit yourself to one idea at a time, • Cut to the chase of course • What kind of tone? • End Nicely.

  17. ACTIVITY #2– Group 10 mins Writing an Internal announcement • You team is developing a system for client support. You need to find out if users would become more efficient or rebel against the thought of change. • How would you test the system • How would you announce the change? • How would you reassure your co-workers?

  18. ACTIVITY #3 – alone 10 mins Writing an Internal Announcement • You have to write a memo describing a new procedure in how users register their support ticket. • How would you justify the need for a new policy? • What concessions or incentives could be made?

  19. Responding to Emails Responsive information must be clear, precise, and usable. • Employ a direct and positive approach. • Clarify the situation/request made. • Maintain Goodwill. • Double check your accuracy. • End Courteously and Professionally.

  20. Request for Information There are times you need more information from a team member, management, or outside source. • Start with your purpose for the request, • List items that need attention, least to most • Finish with a closed ended sentence.

  21. Goodwill Goodwill is an asset that is based on trust and loyalty. • In business, good customer service is a hallmark of goodwill. • Remember in business it is always easier to keep a client than to find a new one.

  22. Positive Responses to Complaints • “It only takes a spark to get a fire going” • Diffuse the situation quickly – wildfires • Look over the facts of the case and not emotions. • Assume the writer has a legitimate beef. • Look for a common solution or ground.

  23. Who dunnit? • If it is you, then honour the claim. • If it is them, then decide best restoration. • If a third party, honour the claim but ensure you can recover from the third party. • There is a reason they are complaining to you.

  24. Bad News Bears Bad News is always the hardest to break. • Passive Voice – avoid the naming game • Common-Ground – general principles adhere to • Praise Buffer – deflecting anger away • Cooperative Buffer – steps taken to resolve • Good-News Buffer – emphasis positive

  25. What NOT to do • When writing in response, avoid doing anything that can damage you or your department’s reputation. • Honesty goes a long way. • Diplomacy goes a long way too. • Avoid overstating, promising to never to happen again, or financial restoration.

  26. Steps in Answering • Determine the nature of the complaint. • Determine which buffer would work. • Move from the buffer to the bad news. • Explain why it was decided without blame. • Do not apologize but acknowledge the situation. • Be courteous but do not patronize.

  27. Activity #4 • You have a new camera installed in the Staff Lunch Room and caught someone in an embarrassing situation one evening. The person demanded the tape, financial payment, and a public apology for the incident. • Of course it wasn’t your fault. • Review Page 44/45 and do #2 pg 46

  28. Business Letters • Writing Business Letters require are more higher degree of formality and punctuality. There are three forms: • Block – date and signature • Modified Block – indentation, less rigid • Simplified Format – no salutation

  29. How to Write • Is there a guideline/policy for FONT? • Company Letter Head? • Avoid personal references. • WIFM not done here. • Avoid flowery language. • Diplomacy.

  30. Thank You letter • A spoonful of sugar makes the medicine go down. • People like to be appreciated. • Casual tones are used, but still professional • Confident but not arrogant • Do within 2 days of event.

  31. Business Proposals • Business proposals is a presentation of arguments and facts in order to persuade others. • Avoid active voice if possible. • People listen to reason faster than debate. • If controversial, start indirectly with common ground method.

  32. Persuasive Proposals • First put all the ideas down, no matter. • Brainstorm and eliminate wild ones. • Use time-sequenced or other lines (slide7) • Know the amount of resistance. • Depending on proposal, start small or big. • Use valid points • Use inclusive language “we”.

  33. ACTIVITY #5 • Brainstorm how you will convince and convey that your client system will do better than the one in place. • Dump all the ideas down. • Pick the best three. • Put them in order.

  34. Executive Summary • Because Business Reports can be long and complex, they require a way to sum up, or present in a snap-shot your proposal. • Start with the reason for the report. • Describe your vision/plan. • End with positive note what the report will accomplish. Pg75

  35. Synopsis • Usually limited to one paragraph. • Informative – Outlines the main points • Descriptive – General description, no detail • Pg 76

  36. Guidelines for Exec Summary • Outline Format. • Gauge the length by length of report. • Describe in short sentences. • Do not use examples here. • Avoid bullets unless backing up with topic. • End on a strong note.

  37. Visuals • Pictures are literally worth a 1000 words. • Nothing beats a picture. • Avoid clutter • Graphs speak more than words sometimes. • Bar charts are better than Pies for growth. • Pies are better for budgets.

  38. Network Usage

  39. You guide my eyes

  40. Q&A Thank you! Tom McLaughlin tom@tomax7.com

  41. Some Acronyms • BDU - Brain Dead User. • ID10T and EEBCAK • PICNIK - Problem in Chair, not in Keyboard • IBM - I Blame Microsoft...Idiots Become Managers. • ESO - Equipment Superior to Operator • SMS Error – Sunspots, Martians, or Snow • NOTOS – Never overlook the obvivous

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