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Western Magazine Awards Foundation

Explore the emotional journey of a city-bred son-in-law as he reflects on the auction and passing of a rural farm in Saskatchewan.

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Western Magazine Awards Foundation

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  1. Western Magazine Awards Foundation The Magazine School TMS 2014 Bringing outstanding writing, design and photography to the classroom www.westernmagazineawards.ca

  2. Western Magazine Awards Foundation • An annual awards program recognizing excellence in Western Canadian editorial work and design. • The Magazine School TMS 2014 is a project of the Western Magazine Awards Foundation. It provides classroom material to instructors and professors.

  3. Gold Award Best Article: Manitoba • Finalists: • Come Together, Mark Reid (Canada's History) • Going, Going, Gone, Matthew Kirby (Canada's History) • Who is Canada's Greatest Explorer? Douglas Hunter, Jacques Lacoursiere, Ken McGoogan, Bill Moreau & Victor Suthern (Canada's History) • Trail of Dreams, Liz Bryan (Going Places) • Rereading Trace, 25 Years Later, Alison Calder (Prairie Fire)

  4. The Winning Entry is: Canada’s History Matthew Kirby Going, Going Gone

  5. About ‘Canada’s History’ magazine • Founded in 1920 by the Hudson’s Bay Company as ‘The Beaver’ • In 2010, it was rebranded to ‘Canada’s History’ • Circulation: 38,000 • Winnipeg-based Click here for Canada’s History magazine website

  6. About the author: Matthew Kirby • Matthew Kirby has a history and classical studies degree and a bachelor of education degree, both from Queen’s University, Kingston, Ontario • He also has a masters in education degree from the University of Victoria, B.C. • He and his wife teach abroad, now in Cairo • He started writing about his travel adventures, such as hitchhiking in Algeria, as a hobby. Most of the stories were written for his son, William

  7. Story Idea • Matthew Kirby’s in laws were in their late 80s • They could no longer manage the family farm, Emerald Farm, named after their Irish roots • None of the kids wanted to run the farm • It would be sold and all contents auctioned off; Kirby’s wife suggested he write about the event.

  8. Story Goal “It was to honour William’s grandparents - and to give William a sense of his father from a different perspective. Emerald Farm was one of our son’s “touchstones” of Canada. So when he was 16, he realized that he would never have another Christmas at the farm and it was difficult.” – Matthew Kirby

  9. Story Query • Kirby’s parents had had a subscription to The Beaver for many years (the former name of Canada’s History), so he was quite familiar with the magazine • He sent a query letter

  10. The Story Query Succeeds • The author’s emotional connection came through “It was a personal account that included feelings and emotions, not just a dry history piece.” – Nelle Oosterom, Senior Editor of Canada’s History

  11. Story Timeline • March 2012: Auction at the Emerald Farm, Sask. • March/April 2012: Author writes in University of Victoria library. 18 to 20 hours writing and rewriting time • April/May 2013: Published in Canada’s History

  12. The Writing Process

  13. Editor’s Thoughts on First Person

  14. Departure from Usual Style “I think what stands out is that this piece has a nice first-person perspective. Not every story lends itself to that. Most of our stories are not written in first person, but in this case it worked really well.” – Nelle Oosterom

  15. Headline and Deck

  16. [Headline] Going, Going, Gone [Deck] A city-bred son-in-law reflects on the passing of a rural way of life

  17. Lede • The original lead had a history of farms, with facts and figures. The editors asked to lead with the auction

  18. Lede “The auctioneer's chant rolls across my in-laws’ Saskatchewan farmyard in a steady, unbroken cadence: ‘What am I bid, what am I bid, what am I bid?’”

  19. Infographic • The information from the original lead was moved to the infographic

  20. Use of Details • The address of the Emerald Farm • The dates and timelines • The models of the farm machinery • The descriptions, e.g., “the white and green clapboard home”

  21. Descriptions “‘The kitchen cupboard is gone for fifteen dollars. Forty dollars takes the dresser. Five bucks on that blue table. You bought it, ma’am, for two dollars.’”

  22. Writer’s Voice: Why this worked • Author was very emotionally connected to this piece • That emotional connection creates an added experience for the reader

  23. Photos • Kirby’s wife Leslie says, “We had masses of pictures, but it was very difficult to choose one to move the story along” • The Kirbys worked together to choose historical pictures and pictures from the auction day to advance the story

  24. Ending • The editor thought writer’s first ending was too abrupt • She asked him: • to create more feeling • to create more of a sense of place

  25. Editing Process • According to both the author and the editor, the editing process was minimal • The first draft returned had 22-23 editing comments, some of them small, some of them lengthier comments to explain the reason for the suggested edit • About three drafts went back and forth

  26. Writer/Editor Relationship “Edit away, slash and burn, and I’ll have a look at what you’ve done. I don't have an ego, my only agenda was to honour my parents-in-law and if it could be published in a magazine they subscribe to, that would be fantastic.” – Kirby

  27. Breaking the Style Book Rules “Sometimes you have to break the rules to get a better end result,”said Nelle Oosterom, editor of Canada’s History on use of italicsto signal each time the auctioneer is speaking Editors felt it signalled to the reader the story was in the present

  28. Advice for Other Writers “It was a delight to show the beauty and artistry of being a farming family and I think that’s so important when you’re writing - that you see and you feel the beauty of the situation. Whatever the story is, you have to feel it and know that it’s a story worth telling, and that it touched your soul - I think that’s so important.” – Kirby

  29. Final Note: George and Gladys Brehon • As of January 2015, Emerald Farm owners George and Gladys Brehon are both 89 years old and happily living in their townhouse in Saskatoon

  30. Credits • The Magazine School is a project of the Western Magazine Awards Foundation, which acknowledges the financial support of the Government of Canada through the Canada Periodical Fund of the Department of Canadian Heritage toward project costs • The Magazine School 2013 content was prepared with the skillful assistance of Janice Paskey, researchers Erin Isings and Jeremy Klaszus and designer Jennifer Friesen with the generous cooperation of the 2014 Western Magazine Awards We acknowledge the financial support of the Government of Canada through the Canada Periodical Fund (CPF) of the Department of Canadian Heritage towards our project costs.

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