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Session 4 Review. Planning templates Who has used the writing moderation kit – how? How do you provide feedback to your school? What teacher/s or content area did you work with?. Working with writing? Session 5 Secondary School Learning Leaders. Providing Feedback .

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session 4 review

Session 4 Review

Planning templates

Who has used the writing moderation kit – how?

How do you provide feedback to your school?

What teacher/s or content area did you work with?

Sandra Pizaro

working with writing session 5 secondary school learning leaders
Working with writing?Session 5Secondary School Learning Leaders

Providing Feedback

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the writing moderation kit a tool kit for looking at student work
The Writing Moderation KitA tool kit for looking at student work
  • Progression Points
  • Writing Continuum
  • Writing Samples
    • It’s a place to put your writing samples marked against the progression points
    • The Writing Criteria – NAPLAN
    • ESL Developmental Continuum – S Stages
    • Looking at your writing samples
    • Asking questions and providing feedback

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make judgements
Make Judgements
  • “What do the samples tell you about the student as a writer?”
  • “What judgements can be made using this writing sample?”
  • “What other samples do you need?”
    • Refer to your resources
      • Handout – “Looking at Student Work”
        • Use Progression Points - USE THE HIGHLIGHTERS
        • Continuum
        • Descriptors of Writing Criteria
        • ESL Continuum (if needed)
  • Share with the group

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question wonder about the writer
Question / Wonder about the writer
  • What questions would you like to ask this student? – record
  • What are you wondering about the student as a writer at this point in time?

Turn and talk

Handout - What feedback would you provide?

What would you teach?

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Conferring with the student/s

Ask questions

Finding teaching strategies

Meet with colleagues to discuss


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Providing effective feedback
    • Feedback for learning
      • Oral
      • Written

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use resources to gather the vocabulary for effective feedback
Use resources to gather the vocabulary for effective feedback
      • chart what you know using the questions that follow?
  • Resources to use
    • Professional Books
    • VELS
    • Writing Criteria
    • ESL Continuum

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your feedback
Your Feedback
  • Teaching Practices
  • Coaching demonstrations
  • Shared and distributed leadership
  • Demonstration and modelling teaching procedures
  • Professional Learning teams for a variety of reasons
  • Making classroom activities relevant
  • Challenging learning with teachers and students
  • Using data to guide teaching decisions
  • Evaluation and reflection on teaching practice
  • Suitable resources
  • TIME for meeting as a team to review data and plan

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reflecting on past sessions
Reflecting on past sessions

How does feedback complement activities demonstrated


Reading to /reading aloud

Discussions / Turn and talk


Reading for specific information in groups

Getting knowledge ready

Building academic vocabulary

Making connections with content areas

Questions and questioning

How do we know we know?


Questions and questioning

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what will moderation achieve for students self school
What will moderation achieve?For:- students, self, school
  • Positive for students, explicit
  • Planning for strategies
  • Collegial support and professional discussion
  • Consistency of judgement
  • Improve literacy for students,
  • building a repertoire and ideas, examples, and different teaching strategies
  • Clear understanding of student – ZPD and what to teach next
  • What to re- teach – at point of need
  • Building teacher confidence to make decisions about students
  • Building teacher capacity
  • Improving student understanding of assessment inclusive
  • Provide feedback to the student, parent
  • Shifting the paradigm
  • Negative : one more layer

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what are the benefits of conferring
What are the benefits of conferring?
  • Direct
  • Focused on the students specific needs
  • Two way process
  • Builds confidence in the students
  • Learning is important
  • Values the students
  • Student values their learning
  • Quieter student gets a say
  • Teachers have a rapport with students
  • Transparency with students
  • Student Active participants- humanising
  • Private/ personalised conversation
  • Get to know the student

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what are the benefits of written feedback
What are the benefits of written feedback?
  • Specific – one thing at a time
  • Suggested ways of improving
  • Documented
  • Students can go back to reflect
  • Less likely to be misinterpreted
  • Use of checklist or template
    • Outcomes listed and comments relate to outcome
  • Clarify what was good or needed to be changed
  • Balance of positives and negatives – start with positives
  • Acknowledge the task – encouragement
  • Providing next steps
  • Students can articulate

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