1 / 18

How to Write Your Personal Statement

How to Write Your Personal Statement. From Planning to Writing Prepared by Les Raphael. First Think About Yourself. Special, unique, distinctive, and/or impressive about you Details of your life that help the committee better understand you or help set you apart from other applicants

alaura
Download Presentation

How to Write Your Personal Statement

An Image/Link below is provided (as is) to download presentation Download Policy: Content on the Website is provided to you AS IS for your information and personal use and may not be sold / licensed / shared on other websites without getting consent from its author. Content is provided to you AS IS for your information and personal use only. Download presentation by click this link. While downloading, if for some reason you are not able to download a presentation, the publisher may have deleted the file from their server. During download, if you can't get a presentation, the file might be deleted by the publisher.

E N D

Presentation Transcript


  1. How to Write Your Personal Statement From Planning to Writing Prepared by Les Raphael

  2. First Think About Yourself • Special, unique, distinctive, and/or impressive about you • Details of your life that help the committee better understand you or help set you apart from other applicants • Overcome any unusual obstacles or hardships • Personal characteristics, for example, integrity, compassion, persistence • Skills, for example, leadership, communicative, analytical

  3. Find an Angle and Talk About Real Experiences • Be specific • Make it interesting • Show or demonstrate through concrete experience • Write in a style that is fresh, lively, and different • Make yourself memorable

  4. Concentrate on Your Opening Paragraph • Lead or opening paragraph generally the most important • Here you grab the reader's attention…or lose it • Becomes the framework for the rest of the statement

  5. Develop the Ideas and Stay Focused • Detail your interests and experiences • Refer to experiences: work, classes, conversations with people, books you've read, volunteer work you’ve done, and so on • Don’t stray away from your topic • Don’t go into long narratives or stories

  6. Avoid Certain Subjects • Controversial • Religion and Politics • Overly personal experiences and extreme hardships/family problems

  7. Write Well and Correctly • Type and proofread your statement very carefully • Express yourself clearly and concisely • Stay close to the word limits

  8. Avoid Cliches • Stay away from often-repeated or tired statements = “I always keep my eyes on the road.” or “I want to be a doctor because I am good at science and want to help people.” • “My grandfather was an extremely significant part of my life. Without him, I would not have many of the advantages I have today.” (These two sentences, though expressive and correct, have essentially said nothing.)

  9. Use Attention Grabbers • “During World War II, my grandfather flew fighter planes with the Tuskegee Airmen.” • That's an attention-grabber that hooks the reader in • Thinking of a catchy opener is easier than you think.

  10. Real Statement Topic From the York Scholarship Page Submit a personal statement of 300 to 500 words (typewritten pages) as described, this statement should include the following: 1. Reasons you selected York College. 2. Reason(s) you feel that you should receive the scholarship 3. Benefits you’ve received from any community service experience you have had. 4. Contributions you feel you can make or are making as a York College student

  11. The Introduction My two passions in life drew me to York College. While some of my fellow high school classmates looked for a campus close to home, others chose the freedom of being far away. Some looked for specific programs of study like pharmacy or law enforcement. Others just followed their friends. I, however, chose York because it is the only school in New York where a student can play in a jazz band and also fly airplanes, the two overwhelming passions of my life. (83 words)

  12. Elaborate Reasons for Selecting York I have been playing the trumpet since I was seven years old. My uncle had an old horn, which he let me fool around with when I was a child. I still have that trumpet and have learned to play it pretty well. York’s Jazz program and classes are both strong academically and allow students to perform with other musicians. I plan to continue following this passion here at York as a minor and then as a life-long hobby. (79 words)

  13. Elaborate Reasons for Selecting York (continued) My other passion, Aviation, is what I want to major in at York and then find work in that field. I want to fly but I also want to understand the business and management areas of Aviation. One day, I hope to manage airport operations at one of New York’s major airports. Only York College could offer me the chance to fly an airplane, learn about airport operations, and at the same time, make music with my trumpet. (78 words)

  14. Reasons for Receiving the Scholarship I believe that I would be a worthy recipient of a York Scholarship. I did well in high school and after one year at York, I have completed 29 credits and have a 3.47 G.P.A. I belong to the flying club and perform with York Jazz ensemble. (47 words)

  15. Benefits from Community Service Also, with the help of one of my music professors, I have organized a group of student musicians and we go to nursing homes in Queens to perform old favorite jazz numbers for the senior residents. Seeing the smiles and clapping and singing along by people who are my grandmother’s age makes me feel that I am really helping those people to have a better quality of life. (68 words)

  16. Contributions to York I am a student who is proud to be at York and will continue to contribute to the quality of student life. I plan to be a leader in the flying club and the jazz ensemble and eventually in student government, where one of my main goals would be to increase the number of paid internships for students. (58 words)

  17. Concluding Ideas I myself plan to intern at Kennedy airport or with one of the airlines such as Jet Blue. When the managers there see how hard I work, how focused I am, and how well educated I have become, they will not only want me to continue working with them, they will also want more interns and full-time workers who study at or have graduated from York College. (67 words)

  18. For Assistance or If You Have Any Questions Please ask at… the Scholarship Center Room 1D10 Note: Always have your papers proofread in the Writing Center, Room 1C18 Good Luck!

More Related