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同儕評量 (Feedback & Revision)

同儕評量 (Feedback & Revision). ( 陳明君 , 2005, pp.72-73)(Level A 9th graders). I like your writing, but maybe you can talk more about your father …What does he do? What does he like to do in his free time?... also talk about yourself …. My mother likes to go shopping…She also

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同儕評量 (Feedback & Revision)

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  1. 同儕評量 (Feedback & Revision) (陳明君, 2005, pp.72-73)(Level A 9th graders) I like your writing, but maybe you can talk more about your father …What does he do? What does he like to do in his free time?... also talk about yourself… My mother likes to go shopping…She also blames us that we waste money a lot. My brother like to play basketball… The most funny thing is my father and I. We are very lazy, just like two pigs. Our same hobby is sleeping and sleeping…

  2. 同儕評量 (Feedback & Revision) (陳明君, 2005, pp.73-74) (level A 9th graders) …The department store is Far-East department store. You can buy shoes on the first floor, clothes on the second floor…The most important thing is that the ladies in the department store are very friendly and nice. That’s why I like to go there… I don’t like shopping. Because I am a boy. I don’t know any place. Please talk more about the department store. What do you usually buy there? Is there any fun? Why do you like shopping? I don’t know…

  3. Group Review (王淑秋, 2003, p. 82)(Level B 8th graders) Because I got a lot red envelopes and ate a lot delicious foods. Because I got a lot of red envelopes and ate a lot of delicious foods. Wow! You’re get a lot of lucky money. I get NT$2000 last year. Wow! You got a lot of lucky money. I got NT$2000 last year. Last Chinese New Year peter usually help clean the house, but Susan didn’t clean. Last Chinese New Year, Peter usually helped clean the house, but Susan didn’t.

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