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Hero Essay. Suggestions for a Better Essay. Your title should be… My Hero, Benjamin Franklin then centered underneath write… by Susie Superwriter . Turn in 6 things : research grid, hero outline, rough draft with my corrections, final draft, rubric, and bibliography.

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Hero essay

Hero Essay

Suggestions for a Better Essay


Revisions

  • Your title should be… My Hero, Benjamin Franklin then centered underneath write… by Susie Superwriter.

  • Turn in 6 things: research grid, hero outline, rough draft with my corrections, final draft, rubric, and bibliography.

  • Take out the highlighted verbs (use control-A).

  • Do not staple the final copy – use a paperclip.

  • Put a check mark next to the correction on your rough draft as you make a change. This will help you keep track of whether you’ve made the correction.

Revisions


It s your essay

It’s your essay!


Using questions and quotations

  • If using a question at the beginning of the essay, make sure it relates to your introduction

    Do you know who created the first firehouse? A hero is a person who helps others… 

    Do you know who created the first firehouse? My hero, Benjamin Franklin, not only created the first firehouse, but many other inventions that we still use today. 

  • If using a quotation, it must relate to the trait you are focusing on

    “The animals at my shelter are my family until they find a family of their own,” said Erin.

    FOUND IN THE COMPASSIONATE TRAIT PARAGRAPH 

Using Questions and Quotations


Evidence and examples

  • Give specific examples and it relates to your introductionexplain – don’t assume that the reader knows something.

  • Your example must illustrate the trait.

    She showed nobility because she trained for three missions and traveled to the moon.  (How does this show nobility?)

    She was brave because she went on 3 missions to space even if it meant danger and risk of dying.  (before this sentence, the author wrote about the Challenger explosion)

Evidence and Examples


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