Hero Essay. Suggestions for a Better Essay. Your title should be… My Hero, Benjamin Franklin then centered underneath write… by Susie Superwriter . Turn in 6 things : research grid, hero outline, rough draft with my corrections, final draft, rubric, and bibliography.
Suggestions for a Better Essay
Do you know who created the first firehouse? A hero is a person who helps others…
Do you know who created the first firehouse? My hero, Benjamin Franklin, not only created the first firehouse, but many other inventions that we still use today.
“The animals at my shelter are my family until they find a family of their own,” said Erin.
FOUND IN THE COMPASSIONATE TRAIT PARAGRAPH
She showed nobility because she trained for three missions and traveled to the moon. (How does this show nobility?)
She was brave because she went on 3 missions to space even if it meant danger and risk of dying. (before this sentence, the author wrote about the Challenger explosion)