Integrated English Writing

1. Integrated English Writing

2. Attendance Please raise your hand and say “HERE!”

3. COMMON WRITING ERRORS Customer Survey Report

4. A recent customer satisfaction survey was carried out by 4,500 customers. • Customers judged the supermarket by the following criterias: shop layout, clarity of signs, cleanliness, shopping atmosphere, ease of movement, and sufficient number of checkouts. • Customer were satisfied with the store is clean and tidy. • 22% of customers agreed with the shop is well laid out. • 66% of customers disagreed that the store is easy to move.

5. Common Writing Mistake #1 Incorrect: A recent customer satisfaction survey was carried out by 4,500 customers. Correct: A recent customer satisfaction survey was carried out by an independent market researchorganization. 4,500 customers took part in the survey.

6. Common Writing Mistake #2 Incorrect: Customers judged the supermarket by the following criterias: shop layout, clarity of signs, cleanliness, shopping atmosphere, ease of movement, and sufficient number of checkouts. Correct: Customers judged the supermarket by the following criteria: shop layout, clarity of signs, cleanliness, shopping atmosphere, ease of movement, and sufficient number of checkouts.

7. Common Writing Mistake #3 Incorrect: Customer were satisfied with the store is clean and tidy. Correct: Customer were satisfied with the cleanliness and tidiness of the store.

8. Common Writing Mistake #4 Incorrect: 22% of customers agreed with the shop is well laid out. Correct: 22% of customers agreed that the shop is well laid out. 22% of customers agreed with the first statement “The shop is well laid out.”

9. Common Writing Mistake #5 Incorrect: 66% of customers disagreed that the store is easy to move. Correct: 66% of customers disagreed that the store is easy to move about (around) in.

10. Peer Editing • Read your partner’s personal statement • and make corrections with a pencil! • Did your partner … • write four paragraphs? • show interest and enthusiasm for the course? • start by writing why he/she is interested in the course? • use formal English? • make any writing errors (grammar, spelling, capitalization, and punctuation)?

11. Please turn in your homework assignments!

12. Unit 15: In my view, … Task: Write an opinion essay Pages: 68-71

13. A discursive essay An example Pages 68, Part 2

14. Opinion Essay Example Page 69, Part 4 (a,b,c)

15. Essay Writing Expressions I will start by examining … It is a commonly held view that … In my opinion, … I would say that … may can 4. In conclusion, … for instance

16. Focus on … Punctuation – the use of commas Page 70

17. Sentences with commas All along the route, we could see beautiful wooded gorges, shimmering lakes, silvery rivers, and majestic waterfalls. The Windy Islands, which are north of Sicily, are fantastic. If you are near enough, stop there for a while. Suddenly, out of the blue, one of three boys walking towards me rushed up to me, shouted something I couldn’t hear, and grabbed my bag, in which I had all my valuables: my wallet, my mobile phone, my camera, and my return train ticket. From what I have seen of the documentaries, some of the most beautiful shapes and colors of the world are found in plants, fish, and other organisms that live on the seabed.

18. Class bonus Write three sentences Page 70

19. Write an Opinion Essay A real TOEFL iBT Essay Question Question: In your opinion, which job is better: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends OR a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons, details, and examples.

20. Write an Opinion Essay • Page 71, Parts 7 and 8 • Introduction: 1 Paragraph • Body: 1-3 Paragraphs • Conclusion: 1 Paragraph

21. Homework Finish writing your opinion essay. Then, type it, print it, and bring it to class next week.

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