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Class Review

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Class Review

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  1. Class Review EW2-047 121695 Tei Min Um BIOTECH

  2. Index • Next blog post • Gary's encouragement and the thing which makes Gary unhappy. • How your MXM result was graded by Gary.

  3. Next blog post • 1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing? • 2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing? • Please post on your blog by 23:59 Sat. Oct. 31st. • Please email me your comments to three other students by 23:59 Mon. Nov. 2nd.

  4. Gary'sencouragementandthethingwhichmakesGaryunhappy. MXM forms only 18% of total grade. Do not ignore advices your friend wrote on your paragraph.

  5. Topic sentence It's, in a word, 'make people eager to read your paragraph!' The meaning of interesting is attracting reader's peep with an attractive topic. The meaning of informative is providing you with useful or helpful Idea. △Tei Min is good at running. Not informative but also interesting. Nobody wonders I am good at running and, nobody gets any benefit from my running ability. Maxium point5 Needs to be interesting and informative.

  6. Supproting sentence You can make paragraph credible by using outside opinion. You can classify It into 2 parts, expert and close with expert. Expert : result of research, Professor's opinion, expert‘s and specialist's advice etc... Close with expert: Travel opinion of Someone who has experienced over 30 countries. ☆Gary think Incheon International Airport is best airport in the world. ★Gary who has visited 30 different countries think Incheon International Airport is best airport in the world. Which is more credible? Maximum point 12 Needs to clear, specific, detail, and concise, in addition, Gary emphasizes on credibility of your supporting sentence.

  7. Supproting sentence Minimum is minimum. If you are asked to use at least one opinion in supporting sentences, Gary will be looking for more and, of course, you deserve to get lower grade than someone who suggest more than two outside opinion. It means 'minimum is minimum!' Maximum point 12 Needs to clear, specific, detail, and concise, in addition, Gary emphasizes on credibility of your supporting sentence.

  8. Concluding sentence Do not add like 'Thank you for reading my paragraph' on the end of paragraph. It's not proper on reasons and examples paragraph but a letter. If you got two points out of concluding sentence grade, doubt that your concluding sentence has played a role as a final supporting sentence. Maximum point 3 clearly ends the paragraph with the writer’s final thoughts.

  9. Writing If your paragraph is composed of only simple sentence, or compound, It may be against to variety, make readers bored during reading yours. Also, you should use a variety of vocabulary to make readers interested in yours. If you couldn’t get Maximum point, doubt that you miss punctuation error. Maximum point 10 There are few errors in grammar, and a variety of simple, compound, complex sentences, and interesting vocabulary.

  10. Visual elements Don't forget Gary refer that There is at least one reference to an outside source (not an image) The title and/or subtitles are catchy and interesting. We can notice the difference between what is not attractive title and what is attractive on page 7, 81, 116 by comparing each other. Maximum point 10 The paragraph follows proper paragraph form, including a properly formatted title, properly used citations, foot notes, etc...

  11. References • Cite • Gary A. (2015). Mid-Term Exam Paragraph Rubric. Retrieved from http://garyaldridge.blogspot.kr/ on oct, 29. 2015 • Gary A. (2015). Syllabus. Retrieved from http://uis.sejong.ac.kr/app/ext/BBopenPlanOZ6.jsp?y=2015&s=20&o=20&d=9001&c=009066&c2=047 on oct, 29. 2015 • Ann H. (2 008). First Steps in Academic Writing. Retrieved from my own book on oct. 29. 2015 • Pictures • Dan Taylor Watt. (June4. 2008). Topic. Retrieved from https://www.flickr.com/ on oct 29. 2015 • A dvanced Site Pros. (A pril 10. 2 013). D oes your website provide trust worthy information? Retrieved from https://www.flickr.com/ on oct 29. 2015 • E nglishme C ommunity. (March 3. 2015). M inimum. Retrieved from https://www.flickr.com/ on oct 29. 2015 • Levi. (March 14. 2008) Gavel. Retrieved from https://www.flickr.com/ on oct 29. 2015 • Enokson. (September 8. 2011) Parts of a paragraph. Retrieved from https://www.flickr.com/ on oct 29. 2015

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