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Learn how to generate ideas, gather and narrow information, and outline effectively for your scientific proposal or technical report. Discover strategies for starting and revising your document, breaking the rules, and making a mess to enhance your writing process.

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  1. Next steps • Generating ideas • Gathering information • Narrowing the information • Outlining

  2. Generating ideas How might you generate ideas? “What people somehow (inadvertently, I’m sure) forgot to mention…was that we need to make messes in order to find out who we are and why we are here—and, by extension, what we’re supposed to be writing.” (Anne Lamott, Bird by Bird)

  3. Gathering & narrowing information How might you gather information? How might you narrow the information?

  4. Outlining • Write an outline (or at least a list). • Start with a standard template and modify. • Add as much detail as you comfortably can. • Don’t etch it in stone.

  5. Scientific proposal template • Significance and objectives • Significance and motivation • Objectives • Hypotheses • Summary of proposed work • Background • Introduction • Literature review • Summary • Proposed work • Overview • Details • Plan • Preliminary work

  6. Technical report template

  7. Writing the document Are you a farmer or a hunter? Advice: Just start somewhere and write. Make a mess. Break the rules.

  8. Writing the document Why is it OK to break the rules and make a mess when you write?

  9. Revising the document Use a top-down approach: • Structure • Paragraphs • Sentences and words • Sentences • Grammar • Word choice • Punctuation http://www.ucalgary.ca/uofc/eduweb/grammar/marking/

  10. Revising the document 1. Structure Revisit purpose, audience, context, content • Did you meet your purpose? • Do you have a new purpose? • Did you address the audience properly? • Did you provide the right content? • Do you need more? • Can you cut anything extraneous?

  11. Revising the document 2. Paragraphs • Make the paragraph the unit • of composition. • b. Ask whether you developed • the idea sufficiently. < 100 words: Developed enough? > 200 words: Split into two?

  12.      Revising the document 3a. Sentences Sentence errors are legion: 1. Sentence fragment 2. Run-on sentence and comma splice 3. Fused sentences 4. Overloaded sentence 5. Mixed construction 6. Faulty parallelism 7. Dangling modifier 8. Misplaced sentence elements 9. Shift of number or person 10. Shift of tense, mood or voice 11. Omissions 12. Lack of variety 13. Illogical sentence (e.g faulty co-ordination, faulty subordination)

  13. Revising the document Sentence fragments “If you write a fragment, you fail.” (W. Heston, 1984) Propane and natural gas on the other hand are still fossil fuels, but they hold the potential for a very good short term solution. Short term meaning eventually fossil fuels will be completely depleted. Where’s the fragment? How would you revise?

  14. Revising the document Run-ons and fused sentences I also have us booked at Fareway on Friday from 4-8pm the store manager said the store is busier on Friday than Saturday. How would you revise?

  15. Revising the document Mixed construction Convective heat transfer is when the flow carries the heat. The reason the coverage of the Olympics frustrates him is because NBC focuses on the stories instead of the sports. Temperatures in Ames will be warmer this weekend.

  16. Revising the document Faulty parallelism Sugarbush Ski Instruction ● Exciting ● Lots of experience ● Enjoyable ● You’ll have a great time!

  17. Revising the document Faulty parallelism Elements of a list must have the same grammatical form. Compare apples to apples. The experiments will involve measuring velocity, sampling the water quality, and to record the wind speed. How would you revise?

  18. Revising the document Dangling modifier What is wrong with these sentences? Groundwater contamination is a major concern when designing the geologic repository. Varying from a simple lime softening system to a complex electrodialysis reversal operation, the incidence of radium in drinking water can be greatly reduced. Based on these tests, we conclude that this option is not feasible. How would you revise them?

  19. Revising the document Misplaced modifier Revise these sentences: Nailed to the fence, Julie read the sign. Having eaten the remains of the zebra, we watched the lion lick its chops.

  20. Revising the document 3b. Grammar 1. Idiomatic grammatical constructions 2. Syntax 3. Usage 4. Case 5. Verb form 6. References 7. Subject-verb agreement 8. Parts of speech  

  21. Revising the document General pronoun reference Antecedents of pronouns need to be unambiguous. These conditions allow MTBE to travel quickly and with little hindrance into the groundwater. This poses a huge problem because the plume for MTBE is much longer than that for any other gasoline product. What is “This” in this passage?

  22. Revising the document Subject-verb agreement What is wrong with this sentence?

  23. Revising the document 3c. Word choice 1. Wrong word 2. Too many words 3. Excessive compression 4. Diction 5. Active/passive voice    

  24. Revising the document Too many words 15% of words in technical writing are unnecessary. Unnecessary Necessary Source: Rehmann made this up.

  25. Revising the document Too many words Shorten these sentences: At this point in time, the firetrucks have not arrived at the airport. In order to give an estimate of the dissipation, we made measurements of the velocity with PIV, which is capable of achieving small-scale resolution. He utilized a saw to facilitate the cutting of the wood. Upon visual inspection, there are three discernible regimes.

  26. Revising the document Too many words Put action in verbs, not nouns. Clue: look for “of”. In all cases the variable dispersion coefficient model provided a much more accurate description of experimental results. Electrodialysis reversal (EDR) uses electric current to achieve removal of hardness and other ions.

  27. Revising the document Too many words Just say it: I am in a position to complete a purchase of a new car. Due to the fact that he experienced a sudden illness, it was necessary that the trip be cancelled. You should have a discussion with Prof. Rehmann if you are in a situation in which you have questions concerning the matter of dimensional analysis.

  28. Revising the document Too many words Don’t oversay it. large in sizeoften timesof a bright colorheavy in weightperiod in timeround in shapeat an early timeeconomics field of cheap qualityhonest in characterof an uncertain conditionin a confused stateunusual in natureextreme in degreeof a strange type past memoriesvarious differenceseach individual basic fundamentalstrue factsimportant essentialsfuture plans terrible tragedyend resultfinal outcomefree giftpast historyunexpected surprisesudden crisis very unique

  29. Revising the document Too few words: excessive compression Omit needless words, but don’t overdo it. An efficient anti-aliasing spectral continuous window shifting technique for PIV (article title)

  30. Avoid cliches: Don’t inflate your language: These experiments go hand-in-hand with the numerical simulations. The skier’s speed is dependent on many factors. Revising the document Diction Avoid slang: This report will take an in-depth look at the Yucca Mountain Project.

  31. Revising the document Diction Don’t mix metaphors: He is not the sharpest cookie in the jar. You can beat a dead horse to water, but you can't make him drink. That's the pot calling the kettle's bluff. He's got too many oars in the fire. It's not rocket surgery. I can see the carrot at the end of the tunnel. The monkey is in your court. Not to put her up on a limestone, but my sister is really terrific. We are treading on thin water We'll burn those bridges when we get to them.

  32. Revising the document Active/passive voice Prefer the active voice: The effect of flow length on longitudinal dispersivity was studied by Xu and Eckstein (1995), and it was found that the dispersivity increases with length. Xu and Eckstein (1995) studied the effect of flow length on longitudinal dispersivity and found that the dispersivity increases with length. The longitudinal dispersivity increases with flow length (Xu and Eckstein 1995).

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