REVISING WRITING

REVISING WRITING. Creating images, emotions, and voice with your words. USE STRONG VOCABULARY. Have your vocabulary list at your side -use words when they are appropriate, not if they stick out. Use a thesaurus to eradicate repetition not to sound sophisticated

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Revising Documents*

Revising Documents*. Revising sentences Revising paragraphs Revising lists - parallelism Revising whole documents

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Revising Essays:

Revising Essays:. You Can Actually Do It Yourself. Revision Tool: STAR. S ubstitute T ake stuff out A dd stuff R e-arrange. Ratiocination. Ratiocination usually means to “reason with a process.” Use this method to edit writing.

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Revising Grammar

GRAMMAR. Revising Grammar. What is grammar?. Essentially, grammar is the set of rules used to ensure the correct use of language. Grammar is a vast subject so we are only going to brush up our skills on the following topics: verbs and tense commas apostrophes capital letters

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Revising Diagrams

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Revising Maths

Revising Maths. How to use your Revision Sheets and Success Criteria. Click on the icon below to see information on how they can help you revise your Maths. Revision Sheets. Success Criteria. Revision Sheets. The revision sheets are divided into 3 separate sections.

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Revising

Revising. and Editing. News Writing. All Writing is Rewriting. How to revise and edit news stories. Remember the basic formula. Use the LQTQ handout. Write a lead that quickly and clearly indicates the focus of the story. The next paragraph supplies the details and remaining 5W ’ s.

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Revising Writing

Revising Writing. Adverbs. What is an adverb? Can you identify adverbs below? It shows that there is a need to teach students about adverbs Surprisingly, is shows that there is a need to teach students about adverbs. It shows there is a need, surprisingly, to teach students about adverbs.

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Revising

Revising. "The difference between the right and the nearly right word is the same as that between lightning and the lightning bug."  – Mark Twain

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Revising = Rewriting

Revising = Rewriting. Or Why your first draft should suck. Revising = Rewriting. What do we do with Feedback? What NOT to do Why Should I Rewrite? What Tools are in my Toolbox? None of this matters. They didn’t get it. Cool stuff from Hampl Actual Exercises.

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Revising Paragraphs

Revising Paragraphs. Shaping for Readers’ Access. Revising Paragraphs. Essay readers expect to see in an essay: An Introduction (with a thesis) A body section (with t opic sentences), and A conclusion . Essay Structure. Revising Paragraphs.

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Revising

Revising. Transitions, Topic Focus, Word Glue. Add Necessary Transitions: Clarifying the Direction of the Paragraph. Original. Revision with transitional sentence added.

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Revising Practice

Revising Practice. Replace boring verbs and average adjectives B oring verbs = is, are, was, were, has, have, had, gone, went, get, got Average adjectives = sad, mad, bad (and the rest of the ‘ad’ family), big, old, nice, fun, good…etc.

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Revising:

Revising:. Looking for ways to make your draft better. Revise for Clarity and Sense. By reading it aloud, you ask yourself if it makes sense and is clear for the readers to understand. Consider whether you have provided enough supporting details and information. Elaborate where necessary.

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Revising & Editing our Essays

Revising & Editing our Essays. Attention Getter. NO Questions : Here’s why… “Have you ever had to kill your best friend? Well, George from Of Mice and Men has to do so.”  Not everyone can relate… Universal Idea/Truth:

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Revising

Revising. Why revise a paper?. Because… w riting is never done  We love to learn! It refines our already brilliant ideas We are humans and make mistakes . The 6 Traits. Ideas Organization Voice Word Choice Sentence Fluency Conventions. Which to focus on first….

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Revising Combustion

Revising Combustion. Revising Combustion. WALT: Conduct an experiment and answer some questions about combustion. What do you remember about combustion?. What is another name for combustion? Burning What 3 things are needed for combustion? Fuel Oxygen Heat

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Revising Your Essays

Revising Your Essays. PART III. Have Your Essays in Front of you:. Do each one of these for each one of your essays:. 7. Correct Use of Quotes. Must be used as part of a sentence The quote with the sentence must read as a complete sentence.

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Revising Checklist

Revising Checklist. For “The Scarlet Ibis” Interpretive Essay. Before we begin, you will need the following colors of pencil, marker, pen, highlighter or crayon: Red Blue Yellow Orange Black

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Revising Your Essays

Revising Your Essays. PART VII POV SHIFT. Point of View. 1 st person POV Uses pronouns: I, we, us 2 nd person POV Uses pronoun: you 3 rd person POV Uses pronouns: they, them, she, he http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comma_splice. Example of shift.

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Revising Questions

Revising Questions. Deshawna is evaluating the use of muggy, breezy, and hot in her description of the weather in the first paragraph (sentences 1-10). What is the most effective way for her to improve her paragraph?.

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Revising Invitation

Day 1. Revising Invitation. Revise Narrative & Sentence Structure Study. Replace Word Choice & Combine or Revise Sentences. Invitation to Notice & Imitate. Day 1. Word Choice. Billy’s disreputable mustache led him into a life of dreadful crime.

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