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This essay serves as a peer review of a biographical essay. It analyzes the structure, content, and style including thesis clarity, body paragraph coherence, and conclusion strength. The review focuses on proper referencing, grammar, and formatting to enhance the overall quality of the essay.
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Peer review in Red pen • Write “corrected by <you name>” on top on the first page • Answer the following questions in complete sentences commenting about their information: whether they are missing information, their information is not detailed enough or the things that are good. Directions
Review his/her rough draft and make sure that all of the content that was checked for during the outline is included. Content Review
Does it introduce the biographical/historical elements that will be used in throughout the essay? • Are they introduced well? • Is there a clear thesis that includes the core, the breakdown, and the source(s). StyleIntroduction
Are the concrete detail, commentary 1, and commentary 2 in the basic order within each chunk? If he/she moved them around, does it still make sense? • Does he/she transition each element of the body paragraph well? StyleBody
Does it draw a conclusion based on all of the commentary stated? Is it explained well? Why or Why Not? • Is there a clear closing thesis? • Does it only summarize? (It should not) • Referencing details to explain the conclusion is fine • Does it sate any new supportive facts/details? (It should not) StyleConclusion
Is it: • Typed • Black/Blue Ink • Font: Times/Courier/Arial • Size: 10/12 • Margins: One Inch • Spacing: Double • Correctly headed and titled Format
For next slide, make the corrections directly in his/her essay
Check for grammar errors, such as: • Commas & Semicolons • Spelling & Capitalization • Contractions • Symbols & Abbreviations • Citations • Indenting Grammar Check