2012 中考作文训练 1 有关情感体验的话题

1. 2012中考作文训练1有关情感体验的话题

2. What makes you happy?

3. 词语匹配 • 1）帮助他人 • 2）取得好成绩 • 3）克服困难 • 4）与家人共处 • 5）经过努力后获得成功 • e. help others • c. get good grades • b. get over the difficulties • stay with one’s family • d. be successful after working hard

4. Topic: What is happiness? • 1. 你心中的幸福是什么？ • 2. 描述一件令你感到幸福快乐的事（要交代时间，地点，过程与感受） • 3. 你认为应该如何创造幸福（至少两点）

5. Pre-writing：Outline … 点题：What is happiness? Beginning Process Result Feelings 事件：A happy thing 1…. 2…. 观点：How to create happiness? … 归纳升华

6. 1.点题：What is happiness Happiness is helping others. Happiness is staying with people you love. Happiness is living in a warm family. Helping others is an important way to (achieve) happiness. I think happiness is just giving others a helping hand. Happiness is helping people (who are) in trouble.

7. 2.事件讲述：A happy thing I can’t forget I helped my classmate last month. My classmate Lily was ill and she had to stay at home. She was worried about her studies. When I heard about that, I went to her home and helped her with her lessons. She wasthankful to me and I felt happy.

8. 3.观点：How to create happiness ----How can we create a happy society? There are some ways. First of all, we should know the importance of helping others. Furthermore，we’d better help people who are in trouble. ----I think we should get on well with our parents and help them in the daily time.

9. 4.归纳升华 • Let’s create happiness and make happiness around the world. • In a word, if we often help others, we will feel very happy. Let’s make our life more and more beautiful . • One for all, all for one. If you want to create happiness, it’s important to enjoy the life and help others.

10. While-writing What is happiness? Happiness is the feeling while ____________. One night, I ____________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ At that time, I felt _________. In my opinion, creating happiness is not difficult in the slightest. First of all, we should ___________. Besides, ____________. After that, ______________________. Let’s create happiness and make the society more harmonious.

11. Post-writing：Self evaluation 评价要点： • 时态有没有用对？ • 拼写有没有错？ • 句型是不是正确？ • 所举的例子是否与你的观点匹配？ • 句子与句子之间的衔接是否自然？ • 文章的结构是不是完整？ • 要点是不是齐全？ • 最后有没有升华点题？

12. 美文欣赏 Happiness is the feeling while helping others. One night, I saw a boy carrying his bike upstairs in the dark. Because the light was dim, it was difficult for him to do so. I turned on the light at once and helped him to carry the bike. The boy thanked me a lot. At that time, I felt extremely happy. In my opinion, creating happiness isnot difficult in the slightest. First of all, we should have a warm heart. Besides, help others when they are in trouble. After that, I’m sure that all of us will feel happy. • Let’s create happiness and make the society more harmonious.

13. 美文欣赏 Happiness is helping others. As we all know, helping others is important to us. I can’t forget I helped my classmate last month. My classmate Lily was ill and she had to stay at home. She was worried about her studies. When I heard about that, I went to her home and helped her with her lessons. She wasthankful to me and I felt happy. How can we create a happy society? There are some ways. First of all, we should know the importance of helping others. Furthermore，we’d better help people who are in trouble. In a word, if we often help others, we will feel very happy. Let’s make our life more and more beautiful .

14. Useful expressions: 表示定义的句型：Happiness is… /…is happiness. 表示时间的词语：one day, a few days ago, the other day 表示感受的句型：I was tired but happy.我很累但很开心。 be thankful to sb. 对某人感激不尽 表示顺序的词语：At the beginning/ At first 开始 First of all/ First 首先, Then 然后 Furthermore/Moreover 再者，还有 At last/ Finally 最后 表示总结的词语： In a word,…总之一句话 表示提升主题的句子：One for all, all for one. 我为人人，人人为我。

15. Homework 请在“压力”“感恩”“代沟”“愉悦感”等四个主题中挑选一个写一篇90词左右的小短文。 (具体要求请看《学案》） Don’t write what you want to, just write what you are able to!

16. Thank you!