Last week, Aerosmith played two sold-out concerts at Target Center.

1. Last week, Aerosmith played two sold-out concerts at Target Center. Type: Incorrect Mistake: #6 Offering a non debatable sentence instead of asserting a point of view.

2. Working in retail sales reveals how rude some customers can really be. Thesis: Correct Type: General

3. This paper will be about affirmative action. Thesis: Incorrect Mistake: Providing an announcement instead of a thesis statement.

4. All of the warnings about eating sugar, fat, caffeine, and cholesterol are often contradictory and confusing to consumers. Thesis: incorrect Mistake: #2 Writing a generality instead of a specific thesis statement.

5. Selling the same item, such as cars or airline tickets, to different consumers for different prices is unfair, unethical, and should be illegal. Thesis: Correct Type: ABC

6. Many food labels today are both confusing and misleading. Thesis: Incorrect Mistake: Writing a generality instead of a specific thesis statement.

7. Sometimes a lie is both necessary and ethical. Thesis: Incorrect Mistake: Writing a generality instead of a specific thesis statement. And/ Or Writing an imprecise sentence instead of a detailed thesis.

8. In order to advance as a democracy, the United States’ society must improve. Thesis: incorrect Mistake: Writing an imprecise sentence instead of a detailed thesis.

9. The death penalty and its consequences are important issues. Thesis: Incorrect Mistake: Writing an imprecise sentence instead of a detailed thesis.

10. Should students be required to pay for all or part of their college expenses themselves? Thesis: Incorrect Mistake: Writing a question instead of a thesis statement.