Elpunzel Retold by Annaliese
Once upon a time there lived a king and Qween . And the qweenwus going to have a baby but she needed so many things to get redey .
So the king went out one day and bumed into somone it was the mean wich of the west and she said “ who just bumed into me “ I did’ siad the king “why” said wich “I wus getting things for my new baby” said king “ok” said wichi,ll let you gofor now.
So the next day they heird a evil laugh hahaha and got up edmetelete, and saw the baby was gone? They shurched to find her but they did not .the wichceppetelpunzel in a tall tower and one night she found she had ice powers.
So the night befor her eightenth birthday she asked if she could have paint but it is very far it will take 3 days “ok”
So she whent of and then she said I whant to go outside but my mother said no “hhhhhhhhh” so she whent out she made some friends miney and olivia .
So well she was brushing her hair and axudentily froze it, it went so high it went to space so she went to see miney and olivia they pushed and pulled hhhhhhhh they could not do it
So she went on asking then she met some one named sun and he melted her hair “thank you” she said and they ended up maring . And lived happily ever after.