初中英语写作技巧指导 Let’s go for it!

1. 初中英语写作技巧指导 Let’s go for it! 湖州四中教育集团 钱 俐

2. warming-up 英语写作的要素 topic sentence 主题句 Beginning supporting sentence 支持句（例子、实事、数据或引文） Body Ending concluding sentence 结论句

3. Which do you like better? 1 我们很累。 A We are very tired. B We are really exhausted. 2 他们在海滩上听音乐。 A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.

4. Which do you like better? 3 我希望你能帮助我。 A I hope you can help me. B I’m looking forward to your help. 4 我们应该努力取得好成绩。 A We should work hard to get good grades. B We’re supposed to try our best to get good grades.

5. Which do you like better? 5 我们在海里游泳，很开心。 A We swam in the sea. We were happy. B We had fun swimming in the sea. 6 最后，他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。 A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.

6. Writing skills 方法一:善用高级词汇

7. Which do you like better? 1 她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。 A She is very young. She can’t carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. too to 2 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。 A It rained heavily. So he didn’t catch the school bus. B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain. because of missed

8. Which do you like better? 3 我认为学英语很有趣。 A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English . find it to 4 我们应该在英语课上记笔记。 A We should take notes in English classes. B Taking notes in English classes is necessary. Taking necessary

9. Which do you like better? 5 小组合作学习可以帮助你学得更好。 A Working in groups can help you learn better. B Work in groups, and you will learn better. Work and 6 我们应该保护环境。 A We should protect the environment. B It’s our duty to protect the environment.

10. Writing skills 方法二:活用多种句型

11. 牛刀小试 审(search) 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 travel visit friends or parents stay at home work

12. 列(list) 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。 • 如何度假 • 调查报告 • 倡议假日休闲 travel visit friends or parents stay at home work

13. 列(list) • A lot of people travel. • Some people stay at home. • Some other people visit friends or parents. • A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.

14. 加(add) • 加首尾，使结构完整。 • 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。 • How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） • A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）

15. 连(connect) • How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. • According to it,a lot of people travel.Andsome people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet.Alsosomeother people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

16. Writing skills 方法三:妙用关联词

17. 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, what’s more not only…but also, neither…nor 2.表示选择: or, either…or 3.表示转折: but,however,although\though,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, not…but, while, in the same way, on the one hand…on the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short 关联词(connection words)

18. Let’s try Though\Although • _____________ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. • He didn’t go to movies, he went to the concert ______. • We like doing kinds of sports _____ swimming, running and hiking. • _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. ____________, he smiled. instead like First Finally\At last Next

19. 连(connect) 美(beautify) • How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. • According to it,a lot of people travel.Andsome people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet.Alsosomeother people visit friends or parents.However,a few people work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

20. 美(beautify) We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.However,a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

21. 美(beautify) According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However,a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb（谚语）

22. 加谚语(Proverb) 锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise… As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.

23. 加谚语(Proverb) 我们应该努力学习。 We should study hard. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should study hard...

24. 加谚语(Proverb) 加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法。 Joining the English club is a good way to learn English. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.

25. 加例子 在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。 I often help my parents do housework, such aswashing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.

26. Writing skills 方法四:妙用引文和例子

27. 2.活用多种句型 1.善用高级词汇 4.妙用引文和例子 3.巧用关联词 技巧 高分作文技巧

28. Let’s go for it! (the beginning) Dear Mr Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon. the body Mary (the ending)

29. Let’s go for it! First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t met before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences.

30. Let's go for it! 1. Problems (Supporting sentences支持句): Please underline and number them. 2. Connection words(关联词): Tick (√) them. 3. Good words: Circle them. 4. Good sentences: Underline them.

31. 1 2 3 4 6 5 Let’s go for it! First First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t met before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. And then So And What’s more Sometimes let alone But

32. Your turn to go for it! Dear Mary, I heard you didn’t do well in English. Here is some advice for you. ________________, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._______, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” ______________, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you. Yours …

33. 1 2 3 Your turn to go for it! Dear Mary, I heard you didn’t do well in English. Here is some advice for you. To begin with ________________, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._______, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” ______________, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._________, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you. Then Of course In fact Yours …

34. 写作技巧 Summary If possible 巧用关联词 列 美 连 加 审 妙用引文和例子 活用多种句型 善用高级词汇 首 尾 necessary

35. Homework Level A: 1.Go through the writing skills. 2.Finish off the passages. Level B: Write aletter to Mary. Try to use the writing skills.

36. Let's go for it! Thank you!