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CONVENTIONS: Fragments & Run-ons. To be complete, a sentence must:. 1. Have a subject 2. Have a verb 3. Express a complete thought. If one or more of these pieces are missing, the group of words is a fragment .
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To be complete, a sentence must: • 1. Have a subject • 2. Have a verb • 3. Express a complete thought
If one or more of these pieces are missing, the group of words is a fragment. • SENTENCE FRAGMENT:A group of words that is only a PART of a sentence and does not express a complete thought.
EXAMPLES: • Flowers that are fresh cut. • In the jar on top of the refrigerator. • While we were swimming.
3-Part Test to determine if a sentence is a fragment • 1. Does the group of words have a subject? • 2. Does the group of words have a verb? • 3. Does the group of words express a complete thought?
Revising sentence fragments: • 1. Link fragment to an independent clause • 2. Develop fragment into a complete sentence
Examples: • Flowers that are fresh cut should be placed in cold water. • We put the candy in the jar on top of the refrigerator. • While we were swimming, Jane was stung by a bee.
RUN-ON SENTENCE:Two or more complete sentences that are written as one sentence. • Example: Measurements originally were related to the sizes of people’s hands, arms, and feet an inch was the width of a thumb.
**To prevent run-ons, READ your writing aloud!!! A natural pause means you have come to the end of a thought.
Revising Run-ons: • 1. Make two separate sentences • Example: Measurements originally were related to the sizes of people’s hands, arms, and feet. An inch was the width of a thumb. • OR
Revising Run-ons: • 2. Make a compound sentence by: • a. Adding a comma and a coordinating conjunction-and, but, for, or , nor, yet, so
2. a. • Run-on: Spanish is the official language of Guatemala many Guatemalans speak Maya Indian languages. • Revised: Spanish is the official language of Guatemala, butmany Guatemalans speak Maya Indian languages.
Revising Run-ons: • 2. Make a compound sentence by: • b. Adding a semicolon ;
2. b. • Run-on: About half the people in Guatemala are descended from Maya Indians about half have mixed Spanish and Indian ancestry. • Revised: About half the people in Guatemala are descended from Maya Indians;about half have mixed Spanish and Indian ancestry.
Revising Run-ons: • 2. Make a compound sentence by: • c. Adding a semicolon AND a conjunctive adverb-therefore, instead, meanwhile, still, also, nevertheless, however • **conjunctive adverbs need to be followed by a comma
2. c. • Run-on: Guatemala’s rich soil is its greatest natural resource, agriculture is one of the country’s main industries. • Revised: Guatemala’s rich soil is its greatest natural resource; therefore, agriculture is one of the country’s main industries.