PROBLEMS!. 跑题。偏题 . 2007.03.04 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today than in the past . Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer . 拆分 Businessmen, scientists, movie-makers.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today than in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Businessmen, scientists, movie-makers.
It is desirable to know about events from all over the world even if it is unlikely to have any effect on your daily life.
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
段落偏题，最后一段的主题句是：这些事情不会对我们产生影响，所以我们应该了解它们。――完全不ｍａｋｅ ｓｅｎｓｅ…段落偏题，最后一段的主题句是：这些事情不会对我们产生影响，所以我们应该了解它们。――完全不ｍａｋｅ ｓｅｎｓｅ…
Some people hold the opinion that in twenty years, the printed books will disappear and just be replaced by the technological inventions like computer.
段落偏题：Second, compared with other electronic productions, paper is much more independent and almost everybody can afford it.（第二段的主题句不切题 ）
Scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts from the scientific discoveries.
Though the advantages that owning a business are numerous, we should not ignore that working for others has some advantages.
2007.03.10 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for a teacher to help students gain self-confidence rather than teaching specific knowledge. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Several years ago, money is（was） still a forbidden zone for children. Admittedly, as a tradition last several centuries, it must have plenty of reasons. When I was young, my parents warned me not to touch money anytime. They thought money is too attractive and I was too young to control myself. As a result, I knew anything about the money until I was 10 years old. Though kids and even teenagers are less controlled, that won’t be a matter if parents or teachers teach them in the collect way. Instead, developing a good habit of spending money in a young age will affect all his life. In other words, as long as a child can spend money regularly, he can prevent any other temptations.（这句才是你这个段落真正的主题句，为什么不放到开头呢？）
Detective films can enhance the capacity of people’s rationality.
Several years ago, money is（was） still a forbidden zone for children. Admittedly, as a tradition last several centuries, it must have plenty of reasons.
This, that, it, them, such…
Government should support scientific research without any practical use.
First, it is an immense waste of money to keep up such a research in science(such a 指的是哪个?应改成impractical scientific researches).
Students who keep their rooms neat and organized are more likely to be successful than students who do not.
I am not in favor of this opinion. First because I can see no connections(link/relationship/association/attachment/bond/relevance) between them . them是什么要具体写出来。
First of all, parenting influence people’s eating habits a lot. When people are young, most of them must spend a lot of time to live with their parents. So whatever things, they also watch and think their parent’s behaviors or must do something what is their parents think is right. Then, they remember and let that became themselves habits naturally no matter that habits are good or bad. Therefore, eating habits is depending parenting(can be affected by the parents).
The first reason that children should not be exposed to TV advertizing is that little kids with crystal innocence might be attainted（topic sentence）. Being covered with vivid and entertaining motions, the primary aim of TV advertisements is to sell its products. Children who haven’t entered the complicate world are not supposed to be effected by the profits-oriented world of adults.
Television advertisement presents children a profit-oriented world，because the primary purpose of commercials is to use all means to sell its products. Exaggerating and faking propagandas on television may perform as a hidden education for children, and thus exert harmful effects on them.
另外还有一种方法就是 “TRUST YOUR GUSH!”（导师Tom Romano 在他的书Crafting Authentic Voice中提到 ）--- 就是想到什么就写什么。我觉得这个方法对英语为第二外语的中国学生来说，试图不通过翻译直接用英文表达自己的想法，是个很好的练习! 因为在练习时不管你的文章 “However poorly worded”, 却是最接近你最初的想法的（你可以事后做修改）。
People who are willing to dabble in new areas have a larger chance to succeed.
Parents are closest to their children and always have faith in them. / and they can encourage their children to succeed.