六级写作模拟题题解

1. 六级写作模拟题题解 厦门新东方学校冯晓锐

2. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: How to Become Confident? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese. • 1 大学生自信心的重要性 • 2 学校应该怎样采取适当的方法 • 3 学生自己应该如何做

3. outline • How to become confident? • The importance of being confident for college students. • What should universities and college do to help students lacking of confidence? • What should students do to rectify this?

4. First sentence of each paragraph • In modern society, it is of great importance for one to face the society confidently. • Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that college students 'lacking of confidence have been a grave problem with which we are confronted. • it is imperative for the colleges and universities to take concrete steps. • it is of vital significance for us to be confident under whatever circumstances.

5. Details • The disadvantages of being unconfident? • It is difficult for unconfident students to find jobs. • It seems that unconfident people will fail every competition they take part in. • It is impossible to make new friends if they are reluctant to present themselves in public.

6. What should college do ? • College concernedshould encourage students to take part in various kinds of competitions and enhance their awareness of being confidence. • Teachers should frequently group students to take part in class activities to enhance their confidence--- • studentsshould encourage each other to keep confident and optimistic ----

7. What should students do ? • It seems that confident students is likely to lead a happy life. • Setting up life goals step by step

8. 替换练习 • Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: • 1. 面试在求职过程中的作用 • 2. 取得面试成功的因素

9. Key points of each paragraph • Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that job interviews are vital for graduates. • In view of the importance of job interviews , concrete steps must be taken.

10. details • well prepared for all the information • diploma certification, you credit records, certification about your awards, publications • pay much attention to your appearance, including your dress and your behavior. • must be confident about yourself. • be also honest, especially when talking about yourself.

11. How to Become Confident • In modern society, it is of great importance for one to face the society confidently. However, college students are reluctant to come out of their shells to meet various challenges. They tend to shun great opportunities to make friends with fellow students, for lack of confidence. Besides, they are unconfident in their abilities, other than be confident enough to present their opinions and show off their personalities, particularly in public.

12. As a consequence, it is imperative for the colleges and universities to take concrete steps.In the first place, the school concerned should enhance the awareness of college students that confidence in oneself is of utmost significance to them. In the second place, the university teachers should frequently group students to take part in class activities to enhance their confidence. Finally, fellow students should encourage each other to keep confident and optimistic in their daily life, even faced with difficulties.

13. Hence, it is of vital significance for us to be confident under whatever circumstances. All of us have to confront a variety of challenges in the years to come. It is worthwhile to notice that some confident students may draw lessons from failure and be brave to deal with the problems and achieve success, while others are desperately frustrated. When most college students are aware of the significance of confidence in oneself, they may lead a confident, happy and fulfilled life in future.

14. 热点篇 • Low carbon life. • 1 现在流行低碳生活 • Leading a low carbon life have gained a lot of popularity recently. • 2 为什么要倡导低碳生活 • Why should we advocate low carbon life? • 3 如何做到低碳生活 • How to carry out low carbon life?

15. Key points of first paragraph • 低碳生活很流行 • 低碳经济，低碳出行/绿色出行，低碳生活，低碳科技等。 • low-carbon economy, carbon footprint, low-carbon technology, low-carbon lifestyle

16. Key points of second paragraph • The development of the world industrialeconomy, • the fast increase of population, • the unlimited increase of the human desire • high-consumption and high-pollution economy model . • life style is becoming the killer of the earth and human beings.

17. Key points of third paragraph • low-carbon life is not only a kind of lifestyle but also life attitude. • people should develop good habits in daily lives. • All in all , we should lead a low carbon life.

18. Low-carbon becomes a high-frequency and fashionable word which gets the greatest concern in the world .Meanwhile, a series of related words, such as low-carbon economy, carbon footprint, low-carbon technology, low-carbon lifestyle, low-carbon society, low-carbon city and so on, comes with the tide of fashion.

19. Why do we advocate and pursue low-carbon life ? • Because of the development of the world industrial economy, the fast increase of population, the unlimited increase of the human desire and the unrestrained production and lifestyle, the human living environment, health and safety are becoming more and more worse; therefore, the high-consumption and high-pollution economy model and life style is becoming the killer of the earth and human beings.

20. How can we live a low-carbon life? • It is imperative for us to live a low-carbon life from now on. Firstly, we should recognize that low-carbon life is not only a kind of lifestyle but also life attitude. Each of us is responsible for the greenhouse gases we emit in our daily actions. Secondly, people should develop good habits in daily lives. consumers can select products with longer shift life when they shop. • All in all, Low-carbon life can be summarized as moderate food, house, transportation, more sports and not wasting.

21. 谢谢大家！