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Composition #8 Common Mistakes. Letter to the Editor. Dear Editor. My name is Chris Wong. I am the chairperson of … Please make reforms to class size. I am looking forward to your reply. Please write to us. I want to know what you think. Dear Editor.

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composition 8 common mistakes

Composition #8 Common Mistakes

Letter to the Editor

dear editor
Dear Editor
  • My name is Chris Wong. I am the chairperson of … Please make reforms to class size. I am looking forward to your reply. Please write to us. I want to know what you think.
dear editor1
Dear Editor
  • My nameis Chris Wong. I am the chairperson of … Please make reforms to class size. I am looking forward to your reply. Please write to us. I want to know what you think. xxx
dear editor2
Dear Editor
  • As the chairperson of …, I write to…. I urge the authority to make reforms to class size. I am looking forward to changes. Other concerned parties are encouraged to write on this issue.
variety if with
VARIETY: If / With
  • Form: If S+V // With (n.)
  • If the class size is reduced,

OR

  • Witha reduction in class size,

… teachers can have more time to prepare lessons.

noun phrase
Noun phrase
  • Reducing the class size
  • A reduced class size
  • A reduction in class size

… can solve the problem of overcrowding in the classroom and overworking of teachers.

be specific
Be Specific!!!!
  • As a result, it can improve the teaching quality.
  • As a result, a smaller class size can improve the teaching quality.
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The teachers can have more time to teach because of …(n.)
  • …reducing the class size.
  • …the reduced class size.
  • …a reduction in class size.

Which ones are better?

any difference
Any difference?
  • Too many studentsaffect the classroom discipline.
  • Havingtoo manystudentsaffects the classroom discipline.
be specific1
Be specific!!!!!
  • With a reduction in class size, teachers can pay attention to the students.
  • …to each students
  • …to every students
  • …to each and every students
  • …to individual students
  • …to all the students individually
improve
Improve…
  • In this way, the relationship between teachers and students can be raised. xx
  • … improved / …enhanced
  • … the level of quality can be raised
suggest
Suggest
  • Form: Suggest + sthg
  • I suggest going to the beach.
  • I suggest he going to the beach.
  • I suggest that we go to the beach.
be specific2
Be specific!
  • Class =/= Classroom
  • Affect… how?
  • Reducing the number of students affects the quality of teaching.
  • … positively affects…
  • … negatively affects…
indeed
Indeed
  • This is a good way to solve the problem.
  • This is indeed a good way…
  • This is certainly a good way…
  • This is no doubt a good way…
  • This is no need to ask a good way…
ordering of items
Ordering of items
  • The lesson is so boring that students are sleeping, day-dreaming.
  • … day-dreamingandsleeping.
  • … day-dreamingorsleeping.
  • … day-dreamingorevensleeping.
  • … sleepingor simplyday-dreaming.
format
Format

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Yours faithfully

Chris Wong

  • Indentation – 2.5cm
  • Block method vs traditional method

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Yours faithfully

Chris Wong

comparing
comparing
  • The classroom has more space when there are just 25 students.
  • The classroom has more space when there are just 25 students, as compared to 40 students at present.