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Improve algorithm precision and speed for optimal performance. Compare effectiveness against standard methods.
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No.1 • (Worse) Our algorithm is more accurate with respect to computational time. • (Better) Our algorithm is more accurate than conventional ones with respect to computational time.
No.2 • (Worse) The chemistry department cooperates with local industry more than their department. • (Better) The chemistry department cooperates with local industry more than their department does.
No.3 • (Worse) The novel material is as strong, if not stronger than, available ones. • (Better) The novel material is as strong as, if not stronger than, available ones.
No.4 • (Worse) The research department’s productivity is higher than the administrative division. • (Better) The research department’s productivity is higher than that of the administrative division.
No.5 • (Worse) The two step-procedure assumes that the sample standard deviation is proportional the sample mean. • (Better) The two step-procedure assumes that the sample standard deviation is proportional to the sample mean.
No.6 • (Worse) The novel material described herein has a higher withstanding temperature. • (Better) The novel material described herein has a higher withstanding temperature than other materials.
No.7 • (Worse) The university stress discipline more than the institute. • (Better) The university stress discipline more than the institute does.
No.8 • (Worse) The peak is as high, if not higher than, other ones. • (Better) The peak is as high as, if not higher than, other ones.
No.9 • (Worse) The form of the fitting function should be defined in advance adopt the regression method effectively. • (Better) The form of the fitting function should be defined in advance to effectively adopt the regression method.
No.10 • (Worse) The trade school’s dropout rate is lower than the university. • (Better) The trade school’s dropout rate is lower than that of the university.
No.11 • (Worse) Temperature more significantly affects the product’s shape. • (Better) Temperature significantly affects the product’s shape more than other factors.
No.12 • (Worse) Our laboratory manager emphasizes punctuality more that our division director. • (Better) Our laboratory manager emphasizes punctuality more that our division director does.