Bronx Masquerade Character Essay. Corrections for Mrs. Michel. Some General Comments:. A good title shows your reader the direction of your essay. Write about literature in the present tense (even if the story happened a long time ago.)
Corrections for Mrs. Michel
Major Errors (Mandatory)
New Final Draft (Optional)
On separate, lined paper:
copy the original sentence that contains the major error (sentences marked with “X” in the left margin)
name the error the sentence contains
write a corrected version of the sentence.
Hand in a new final draft of your essay, changing as much or as little as you see fit. Make sure that all of your changes (even major errors) are highlighted in your new final draft. You will hand in your first final draft with the new final draft by class on Friday.
Where do you live/stay? Describe your neighborhood. What is it near? What does it look like? What are the streets like? What are the homes like? Is there open space or are homes close together? How much green space is there? How many people live/stay there? What are the people like there? Describe your neighbors. What do people in your neighborhood do outside? What sounds or smells are in your neighborhood? What is it like to live/stay where you do? How long have you been there? Do you like being there? Why or why not? Do you want to live/stay somewhere like that when you grow up or do you want to live/stay somewhere else? Why? Be descriptive!
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