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Warrrrrrrrrm Up. How does the legacy of Steve Jobs compare to that of people we have studied this term in World H istory? Will he make the history books of the future?. Writing Hints. Let’s destroy those DBQs, y’all. The PROMPT.
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Warrrrrrrrrm Up How does the legacy of Steve Jobs compare to that of people we have studied this term in World History? Will he make the history books of the future?
Writing Hints Let’s destroy those DBQs, y’all
The PROMPT • Yes, the prompt, alright alright. We ALWAYS FOCUS ON THE PROMPT. • Why write about anything else? • You shouldn’t. • The prompt for the assignment we’re working with: • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?
Thesis • Identify the argument you plan to make in your essay. • Use this to outline your arguments throughout the essay • Do not use first person. • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?
Examples of Stronger/Weaker Essays • The writing of your peers will help you see where strengths and weaknesses lie. • These are your peers’ essays, so BE RESPECTFUL. There will be no tolerance for disrespect. • Do not identify yourself as the writer of the essay • We need to focus on several items to become excellent writers.
Example • Leonardo da Vinci reflected the values of humanism in his work by achieving various things he set out to do. • On Prompt? • Content correct? • Worded correctly? • Essay to come? • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?
Example • Michelangelo Buonarretti’s art reflects humanism on his artwork because of his sole focus on a single human being the main aspect of his art. • On Prompt? • Content correct? • Worded correctly? • Essay to come? • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?
Example • Without humanism, Michelangelo wouldn’t be able to respect himself. • On Prompt? • Content correct? • Worded correctly? • Essay to come? • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?
Example • [Da Vinci] reflected the values of humanism in his work by painting the Mona Lisa and The Last Supper and focusing on one person rather than a lot. • On Prompt? • Content correct? • Worded correctly? • Essay to come? • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?
Example • I think he did this to show his compassion or idea on human nature. This is why I think he reflect humanism in his work. • On Prompt? • Content correct? • Worded correctly? • Essay to come? • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?
Example • Da Vinci reflects the values of humanism in his work because he painted individual people in his paintings, that his personal ideas on topics were important, and he showed that the potential of the human mind was almost limitless in his work. • On Prompt? • Content correct? • Worded correctly? • Essay to come? • How does EITHER Michelangelo orDa Vinci reflect the values of humanism in his work?