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Showing vs. Telling

Showing vs. Telling. “Don’t just say the old lady screamed. Bring her on and let her scream.” ~ Mark Twain. Show: As Alicia stepped into the white hot light of noon, she felt her black hair attract the sun’s rays and begin to fry her head. Tell: It was a hot day.

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Showing vs. Telling

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  1. Showing vs. Telling “Don’t just say the old lady screamed. Bring her on and let her scream.” ~ Mark Twain

  2. Show: As Alicia stepped into the white hot light of noon, she felt her black hair attract the sun’s rays and begin to fry her head. Tell: It was a hot day.

  3. Show:Charlie's rear end sagged and his head drooped so low his ears dragged on the ground. Tell: Charlie looked sad.

  4. Show:Turning the blinds ever so slightly, Mrs. Parker could just peek through the window and see the Ford Explorer parked in the driveway. She squinted her eyes so she could get a better view of the tall, muscular man getting out of the vehicle and walking up to Mrs. Jones' front door. He rang the doorbell. When Mrs. Jones opened the door and welcomed the stranger into her home with a hug, Mrs. Parker gasped and ran to her phone. Tell: Mrs. Parker was nosy. She gossiped about her neighbors.

  5. Show: Steam rising up off the melted cheese made my mouth water. The first bite, my teeth sinking into the cheese through the tomato sauce and into the moist crust, made me chew and swallow rapidly. Even the cheese and tomato sauce, sticking to my fingertips, begged to be licked. Tell: The pizza was delicious.

  6. Show: Sitting at his desk, his jaw tightened. His eyes flashed heat waves at me. The words erupted from his mouth, "I want to talk to you after class." The final hiss in his voice warned me about his feelings. Tell: He is angry.

  7. Show: Behind the mountains, the sun peaked brightly, ready to start a new day. The blue sky remained silent yet showed signs of sadness. The wind whispered through the trees as the cheerful sun rose. The birds sang gently by my window as if they wanted to wake me up. Tell: The morning was beautiful.

  8. Show: Bill sat in a dentist’s waiting room, peeling the skin at the edge of his thumb, until the raw, red flesh began to show. Biting the torn cuticle, he ripped it away, and sucked at the warm sweetness of his own blood. Tell: Bill was nervous.

  9. Tell: Mary was tired. Show: Mary shuffled into the kitchen, yawning and blinking. Collapsing into a chair, she closed her eyes, crossed her arms for a pillow, and slowly tucked her head into the fold.

  10. Tell: The house seemed deserted. Show: A floorboard creaked under my foot as I stepped over the threshold. Not even a curtain stirred at he open window as my eyes swept the room, and the ticking clock over the mantel echoed in the stillness.

  11. Directions: Change the following paragraph from a telling paragraph into a showing paragraph. I was afraid as I walked down the pathway. It was dark outside and I felt nervous when the wind began to move the plants and trees. Trees were on both sides of the path and only a single light stood halfway down the path.

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