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Improving Writing: Eliminating "Be" Verbs for Better Expression

Learn how to enhance your writing by removing "be" verbs. Discover the drawbacks of these verbs and explore problem-solving strategies to eliminate them, resulting in more powerful and specific writing.

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Improving Writing: Eliminating "Be" Verbs for Better Expression

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  1. Revision “To be, or not to be” Improving writing by eliminating “be” verbs

  2. He used three “to-be” verbs right there! • If it’s good enough for Shakespeare, it’s good enough for me. • Perhaps, but Billy used only six more “to-be” verbs in Hamlet’s next 34 lines. • I can recite the soliloquy now if you like…….. Didn’t Shakespeare say “To be, or not to be: that is the question:”?

  3. 1. The “to-be” verbs: is, am, are, was, were, be, being, been are state of being verbs, which means that they unduly claim a degree of permanence. For example, “I am hungry.” For most Americans, hunger is only a temporary condition. What’s So Wrong with “To-Be” Verbs?

  4. 2. The “to-be” verbs claim absolute truth and exclude other views. “Classical music is very sophisticated.” Few would agree that all classical compositions are always sophisticated.

  5. 3. The “to-be” verbs are general and lack specificity. A mother may tell her child, “Be good at school today.” The more specific “Don’t talk when the teacher talks today” would probably be more instructive.

  6. 4. The “to-be” verbs are vague. For example, “That school is great.” Clarify the sentence as “That school has wonderful teachers, terrific students, and supportive parents.”

  7. Problem-Solving Strategies to Eliminate the“To-Be” Verb

  8. 1. Substitute-Sometimes a good replacement just pops into your brain. For example, instead of “That cherry pie sure is good,” substitute the “to-be” verb is with tastes as in “That cherry pie sure tastes good.”

  9. 2. Rearrange-Start the sentence differently to see if this helps eliminate a “to-be” verb. For example, instead of “The monster was in the dark tunnel creeping,” rearrange as “Down the dark tunnel crept the monster.”

  10. 3. Change another word in the sentence into a verb-For example, instead of “Charles Schulz was the creator of the Peanuts cartoon strip,” change the common noun creator to the verb created as in “Charles Schulz created the Peanuts cartoon strip.”

  11. 4. Combine sentences-Look at the sentences before and after the one with the “to-be” verb to see if one of them can combine with the “to-be” verb sentence and so eliminate the “to-be” verb. • For example, instead of “The child was sad. The sensitive young person was feeling that way because of the news story about the death of the homeless man,” combine as “The news story about the death of the homeless man saddened the sensitive child.”

  12. Highlight ALL of the “be” verbs in your piece. • Get rid of ALL be verbs in your piece, or die trying. • See how much more powerful your writing becomes! • SAVE your rough draft with your highlights and revisions to turn in with your final copy. Your Mission Today

  13. is, am, are, was, were, be, being, been • Contractions count – isn’t wasn’t aren’t, weren’t, there’s • Highlight them all! • Eliminate all but one in each paragraph. The “be” verbs

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