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1. The following report contains errors. Read the report carefully and make the appropriate changes by Editing and Revising. Errors: Spelling, Punctuation, Grammatical Errors On Wednesday the fourteen of Janary 2019 the fairview primary school hosted their “ Easter Bonnet Parade” in the assembly area on the school compound. The event was hold to celebrated the Easter Holiday as well as too raise funds for installing an air condition unit for the standard five classroom. The event which was organized by the group of teachers and several parent commenced at prompt half past ten. The participants consisted of four students from each of the seven classes ranging from first year to standard five. Of the four chosen from each class, two were girls and the other two boys. The two boys were paired with the two girls for displaying their Easter costumes which were designed by their parents and themselves. Many of the costumes portrayed the appointed theme of Nature and Recycling. Parents, Teachers and students made up the audience. The space, outfitted with a stage was decorated in the pastel collars of blue, pink, green, orange and purpel. The prinicipal, mr mahase, acted as the emcee. He welcomed everyone and thanked them for participating. Next, he opened the event with a prayer follow by the national anthem. The first of the fourteen pair of students to model their outfits were the first year students. The audience applauded and many took photoes. There were costumes and bonnets of various sizes, colours and designs. With mic in hand, the prinicipal introduced each pair of

2. model and described the theme being presented. This continued until the class of standard five. When the last models departed the stage, the principal asked the audience to applaud the efforts of the teachers, students and parents. He once thanked the audience and concluded the event at approximately 3:30 p.m. . Afterwards, refreshments, snack boxes and a drink were provided.