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Shifts in Number and Person. NEC FACET Center. PART 1. Shifts in Person. What is “person”?. In English grammar, the term “person” refers to a classification system for pronouns. Pronouns are common words we use to take the place of nouns ( I , you , he , she , it , we , they , etc.).

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Shifts in Numberand Person

NEC FACET Center


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PART 1

Shifts in Person


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What is “person”?

  • In English grammar, the term “person” refers to a classification system for pronouns.

  • Pronouns are common words we use to take the place of nouns (I, you, he, she, it, we, they, etc.)


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How do we classify pronouns?

  • When speaking of these pronouns, we can divide them into groups in two ways:

    • according to whether they are singular or plural--one or more than one.

    • according to whether they are first person, second person, or third person.


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Classification of Pronouns

,

mine

, ours

,

,

yours

yours

,

theirs


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Recognizing 1st Person

Ithink I will

start a new

company. I

want some-

thing that is

all mine!

  • Writers or speakers who use first person speak directly about themselves by using the words I, me, my, mine.


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Recognizing 1st Person

We could start our own company. Then we could have something that is truly ours.

  • Writers or speakers who use first person speak directly about them-selves by using the words I, me, my, mine orthe plural pronouns we, us, our, ours.

  • Notice that the speaker is still talking about himself even though he is now including someone else.


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Recognizing 2nd Person

You could start your own company. Then you could have something that is truly yours.

  • Writers or speakers who use second person are not speaking about them- selves.

  • They are writing or speaking directly to someone else.


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Recognizing 3rd Person

Sandra should start her own business.

  • Writers or speakers who use third person are neither speaking about themselves nor directly to someone else.

  • They are writing or speaking about someone or something else by using words such as he, him, she, her, it, its.


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What is a shift in person?

A shift in person refers to a mistaken change

in person within a sentence or group of

related sentences.


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Example of a Shift in Person

  • When people get angry, we sometimes say things you would not say when calm.

  • Do you recognize the problems?


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Example of a Shift in Person

  • When people get angry, we sometimes say things you would not say when calm.

  • people = 3rd person

  • we = 1st person

  • you = 2nd person


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Revised Sentence

  • When people get angry, they sometimes say things they would not say when calm.

  • people = 3rd person

  • they = 3rd person


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Another Shift in Person

  • On reaching the campsite, one must be upset to discover you must walk another mile for fresh drinking water.

  • Can you spot the problem?


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Another Shift in Person

  • On reaching the campsite, one must be upset to discover you must walk another mile for fresh drinking water.

  • one = 3rd person; you = 2nd person

  • How can you revise it?


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Revised Sentence

  • On reaching the campsite, one must be upset to discover one must walk another mile for fresh drinking water.

  • On reaching the campsite, one must be upset to discover he or she must walk another mile for fresh drinking water.

  • On reaching the campsite, you must be upset to discover you must walk another mile for fresh drinking water.


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Another Shift in Person

  • Nick, Lisa, and I took a close look at the money, and you could see that it was fake.

  • How would you correct this sentence?


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Revised Sentence

  • Nick, Lisa, and I took a close look at the money, and we could see that it was fake.

  • Change the 2nd person you to first person plural we. Notice that the subject (Nick, Lisa, and I)is first person plural.


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PART 2

Shifts in Number


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Pronoun Number

  • You may remember from the pronoun chart that some pronouns are singular and others plural.

One

More than one


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Singular and Plural Pronouns

Singular: I, me, my,

mine, she, her, hers

(orhe, him, his when

referring to a man

or a boy )

Plural: we, us, our, ours,

they, them, their, theirs

Singular:

it, its


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Special Note

Would you

like to use my

phone?

  • Depending on whether one is writing or speaking to an individual or a group, second person pronouns (including you, your, yours)can be either singular or plural.


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Choosing the Right Pronoun

  • Just as you select pronouns based on the correct “person,” you must also select them based on “number.”

  • Only two types of number exist:

    • singular

    • plural


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What is a shift in number?

  • Changing from singular to plural or from plural to singular when referring to the same person or thing creates a shift in number.


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Singular

or

plural?

How do I know if I am shifting number?

  • First, you must recognize the word serving as the “antecedent” for the pronoun.

  • Then you must match the “number” of the pronoun to the “number” of the antecedent.


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What is an antecedent?

  • Although this rule may sound difficult, it is actually quite simple.

  • The antecedent is the word that the pronoun refers to--in other words, the word the pronoun is renaming.


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Example

  • The car looked brand new although it was actually sixty years old.

  • Pronoun: it (singular)

  • Antecedent: car (singular)


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Another Example

  • These students attend college during the day, and they work in a restaurant at night.

  • Pronoun?

  • Antecedent?


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Another Example

  • These students attend college during the day, and they work in a restaurant at night.

  • Pronoun? they (plural)

  • Antecedent? students (plural)


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A Final Example

  • The manager was almost run down as shoppers hurried past him toward the meat department.

  • Pronoun?

  • Antecedent?


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A Final Example

  • The manager was almost run down as shoppers hurried past him toward the meat department.

  • Pronoun? him (singular)

  • Antecedent? manager (singular)


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Example of a Shift in Number

  • Classes have been cancelled for today, but it will resume tomorrow.

  • Pronoun?

  • Antecedent?


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Example of a Shift in Number

  • Classes have been cancelled for today, but it will resume tomorrow.

  • Pronoun? it (singular)

  • Antecedent? Classes (plural)

  • When pronoun and antecedent don’t match in number, you have a “shiftin number.”


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Revising the Shift

  • Classes have been cancelled for today, but they will resume tomorrow.

  • Pronoun? they (plural)

  • Antecedent? Classes (plural)


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A Common Cause of Shifts in Number

  • Shifts in number often result when a writer tries to avoid “gender bias.”

  • “Gender bias” refers to discrimination against either sex--male or female.


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Example of Number Shift to Avoid Gender Bias

  • An employee who wishes to take time off during the holidays should submit their request by Friday.

  • their (plural)

  • employee (singular)


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The Result

  • Although the writer correctly included both sexes, the result was a pronoun error.

  • The writer could have avoided the error in either of two ways:


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Revision # 1

  • An employee who wishes to take time off during the holidays should submit his or her request by Friday.

  • Both pronoun and antecedent are now singular.


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Caution

  • This solution works well as long as the writer does not need to use “his or her” repeatedly.

  • Such repetition would result in awkward sentences.

his or her

his or her

his or her

his or her

his or her

his or her


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Revision # 2

  • Employees who wish to take time off during the holidays should submit their requests by Friday.

  • By using a plural pronoun and plural antecedent, writers can avoid both the pronoun error and the potentially awkward sentences using “his or her.”


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Can you spot the shift in number?

  • Both snakes hissed, and one flicked their tongue.


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The Shift in Number Revised

  • Both snakes hissed, and one flicked its tongue.


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Collective Nouns

  • Collective nouns represent a group and are usually considered singular.

class

society

faculty

jury

school

committee

tribe

government

team

company

flock


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Example

  • Incorrect: The jury deliberated two weeks before giving their verdict to the judge.

  • Correct: Thejury deliberated two weeks before givingitsverdict to the judge.

  • The jury acts as a single unit.


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Another Example

  • Incorrect: A family offers their members both physical and emotional support.

  • Correct: A family offers its members both physical and emotional support.


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A Third Example

  • Incorrect:The orchestra gave their summer concert on the Fourth of July.

  • Correct:The orchestra gaveits summer concert on the Fourth of July.


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Think of an appropriate pronoun.

  • The committee will soon make _____ recommendations.

  • The team will play for the championship if ____ can win one more game.

  • After touring Gilcrease Museum, the class loaded into _____ school bus.


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The Answers

  • The committee will soon make its recommendations.

  • The team will play for the championship if it can win one more game.

  • After touring Gilcrease Museum, the class loaded into its school bus.


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Indefinite Pronouns

  • When writing, you must also pay particular attention to indefinite pronouns, such as the following, when they serve as antecedents:

    • anyone, everyone, someone, no one

    • anybody, everybody, somebody, nobody

    • either, neither

    • each of, either of, neither of, one of, every one of,


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Singular or Plural?

  • Indefinite pronouns are normally considered singular.

  • Therefore, when they serve as antecedents, the pronouns that follow them should be singular.


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Example

  • Incorrect: Neither of the boys has opened their gift yet.

  • Correct: Neither of the boys has opened his gift yet.

  • In this sentence, we are looking at the boys as individuals.

  • Each boy has received his own gift and will open it himself.


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Another Example

  • Incorrect: Everyone has their own opinion.

  • Correct:Everyonehas his or her own opinion.

  • Again, each person is looked at as an individual.


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Think of an appropriate pronoun.

  • Someone left _____ purse in the shopping cart.

  • Each of the houses has a hot tub in _________ master bathroom.

  • Everyone is entitled to ______ own opinion.

  • Neither of the actors had memorized ____ lines yet.


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The Answers

  • Someone leftherpurse in the shopping cart.

  • Each of the houses has a hot tub in itsmaster bathroom.

  • Everyone is entitled tohis or her own opinion.

  • Neither of the actors had memorized hislines yet.


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REMEMBER--

  • Pronouns and antecedents must agree in person and number.


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Some of the Rules

  • Use 1stperson pronouns when writing or speaking about yourself.

  • Use 2nd person pronouns when talking or speaking directly to another person or group.

  • Use 3rd person when talking or speaking about another person, object, or group.


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The Remaining Rules

  • Use singular pronouns when the antecedent is singular. (Remember that indefinite pronouns and collective nouns are nearly always singular.)

  • Use plural pronouns when the antecedent is plural.


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