The Best Family Day Ever

1. The Best Family Day Ever Raquel Fourth grade Bronx Charter School For Excellence 11/19/10

2. My First Family Day was when I was 5 years old. My mom and I went on a roller coaster ride. I was feeling queasy because I didn’t eat any breakfast. When we got on the roller coaster, it got stuck. I was so worried because I thought we were all going to fall off the roller coaster and I started to cry. When the mechanics fixed the roller coaster, not everyone knew that the ride had ended. Then the manager gave us all another free ride. After the ride on the roller coaster I became hungry.

3. My mom and I walked back to the bus and looked for the bags with the food. My mother had made fried chicken, macaroni salad and boiled eggs. My sister was already on the bus when we got there. She was eating. Istarted crying because she ate just about everything. My mother and I went to the food stand and ordered hotdogs that were as long as my ruler, I said “ Wow!” because the hotdogs were12 inches long!

4. Then my mom said,” How much are the three hotdogs?” The woman said, ’’Five dollars.” My mother said, ”Five dollars? Just for two hotdogs?!!” My mom bought them anyway and said , ”Thank you.” Then my mom and I went to the table and ate the hotdogs. We went on the Ferris wheel and it was going in so many circles that I was getting dizzy. I started throwing up and the man who operated the ride stopped the ride so I could get off. I was tired! I went on the bus where I lay down and I was still throwing up.