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CEP Set 3 (E). Task 1. East College celebrat ed its 50 th anniversary on 12 February, 2011, with one hundred past graduates and four guests attending.

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Cep set 3 e

CEP Set 3 (E)

Task 1


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East College celebrated its 50th anniversary on 12 February, 2011, with one hundred past graduates and four guests attending.

The school was originally located in Jordan, and there were only 5 teachers and 65 students in its first years. However, it moved to a larger building in Hung Hom in 1972, and there are 22 teachers and over 800 students now.


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Our past graduates have done very well in manydifferent areas.For example, Mr Jeremy Kwok won the Hong Kong Book of the Year Award in 1990. In addition, Ms Tracy Liu is the Secretary for Education whileMs Lucy Tung owns a successfully business called Hi Tech International.

The celebration included a full stage programme. The special guests gave speeches about themselves and the school, and some of the past graduates and students sang the school song and other songs together. In addition, the principal presented awards to outstanding past graduates and past teachers. The programme ended after the Drama Club staged a musical to honour the celebration.


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Besides the stage programme, visitors were alsotreated to two displays. There was a display of school annuals from past years and a display about the school’s history.

The celebration would not have been possible without the hard work of the student volunteers. The Form 4 volunteers greeted the guests and designed the invitations. The Form 5 and Form 3 volunteers decorated the auditorium and the lobby. They were also responsible for the displays and the cloakroom.


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We would like to thank all the student volunteers for their efforts in making the celebration a wonderful success.


Reminder for task 1

Reminder for Task 1

  • Point 2: give the number of graduates (total)

  • Point 3: don’t give names of guests

  • Points 8-10: focus on achievements of graduates

    X Jeremy Kwok wrote a book called Rain

    Shadows.

     Address the graduates by surname


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Style:

X The details are as follows:

X In the introduction:

We had many student volunteers this

year, yet do you know the details of the

celebration? Let me give you more

information about the anniversary

celebration.

X Don’t use contracted forms.


Relevance

Relevance

  • Detailed address of school

  • Full names of guests

  • Exact time of reception and performance

  • Taking photos is not stage performance

  • Giving starting time of reception and program time e.g. 6.30 p.m., 8.30 p.m.

  • Detailed description of the achievements

  • Form 4 volunteers help with sending thank you letters to guests


Task 1

Task 1

Details of the event

  • Date: 12 February, 2010

  • 100 past graduates NOT 70 + 30

  • 34 special guests

    Brief history of school

  • Location: originally in Jordan

  • 5 teachers & 65 students

  • Location: Hung Hom in 1972

  • 22 teachers & 800 students


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Past graduates’ achievements

8. Mr Jeremy Kwok …. Award

9. Ms Tracy Liu … Secretary for Education

10.Ms Lucy Tung … Hi Tech International

Details of stage programme

11. Guests … gave speech

12. Graduates …sang school song and other

songs

13. Principal … presented awards

14. Drama Club … a musical


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Details of the displays

15. Display of school annuals

16. Display of school’s history

Various contributions of student volunteers

17. F.4 volunteers greeted the guests

18. F.4 volunteers designed the invitations

19. F.5 and F.3 volunteers decorated the

auditorium and lobby

20 F.5 and F.3 volunteers were responsible for displays and cloakroom

21. Thank all student volunteers for their efforts


Task 2 32 marks

Task 2 (32 marks)

  • Positive comment: key information

  • Criticism: key information

  • Specific suggestion for next time

    Use bare infinitive after ‘should’, ‘could’,

    ‘can’

    sb suggest sb (should) do sth


Common mistakes

Common mistakes

History display

X attracted a lot of attention

 good selection of items

Dining

X good food  wide selection of food

Songs

X graduates built school spirit

 songs built school spirit


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Photographs

X photographers did very well

 photos are of high quality

Flowers

X select flowers in the course

 smart to have flowers in school colours


Criticisms

Criticisms

Dinner

X not enjoy eating while standing up

 people not enjoy eating while standing up

Musical

X The lights were not working.

 Some lights were not working.

Photographs

X Not enough photographers

 Not enough photos


Specific suggestions

Specific suggestions

Photographs

 Ms Au suggests that students help (to) take photos.

X Ms Au suggests taking photos.

X Ms Au suggests students can help take photos.

X Ms Au suggests students helping take photos.

Cloakroom

We ought to have two areas for the cloakroom.


Task 3 marks

Task 3 ( marks)

  • Factual errors : content (7 + 3 marks)

  • Grammatical change

  • Grammar for last section: 3 marks

  • Total: 13 marks

  • * Use third person plural ‘they’ in the last paragraph to refer to student volunteers.


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