Revising your Proposal: good advice. See chapter 6 in Introduction to Engineering Communication. The three stages of rewriting: Revising . . Editing . . Proofing. Revising : reorganizing, moving text around, rewriting paragraphs and sections Editing : making sentence-level corrections
Revising your Proposal:good advice
Evaluation of Preventative Measures
The technical staff evaluated the following measures on the basis of two criteria: 1) how well they address particular problems with management of such disasters and 2) compatibility with existing infrastructure.
This section describes these measures, defines the evaluation criteria, evaluates the measures for local application, and suggests a method for prioritizing them.
Enhanced Training for Contractors
Be kind to the reader!
Do section headings make sense for my proposal?
Don’t start sentence with and.
Consider replacing they’re with