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Why Revise?. A look at some of the world’s greatest revisions. Do Now. Show your creative side on a sticky note! Describe life with middle schoolers or life implementing Springboard with…

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Why revise

Why Revise?

A look at some of the world’s greatest revisions.


Do now

Do Now

  • Show your creative side on a sticky note! Describe life with middle schoolers or life implementing Springboard with…

  • a compound sentence (two independent clauses + a fanboyscoordinating conjunction…for, and, nor, but, or. yet, so)

  • a complex sentence (an independent clause + a subordinating conjunction in a dependent clause… when because, although, while, since, after, though)

  • a sentence with an appositive


The usa s national bird

The USA’s National Bird

From a Silly Turkey...Revised into…A Majestic Eagle!


The way we see at night

The Way We See at Night

Flickering Candle…

Revised…

Glowing Lightbulb!


The way we play

The Way We Play

SimpleWater Toy…

Revised…

Giant Supersoaker!


The way we fly

The Way We Fly

Canvas and Wood…

Revised…

Steel and Glass!


The way we listen

The Way We Listen

Imogen Heap

“Hide and Seek”…

Revised…

Jason DeRulo!

“Whatcha Say”


Revision springs from choices

Revision springs from Choices

Writers transform writing when they reflect on their

purpose

audience

structures


Written response

Written Response:

Answer the following:

After seeing these real life examples of revision WHY is revision important?

What is the difference between revision and editing?


6 springboard unit 4

6 Springboard Unit 4

Read the Unit Overview on page 277

Read the Learning Focus on page 279

Unit Essential Questions

  • Why is it important to reflect on personal changes and growth?

  • Why does successful writing require global revision?


7 springboard unit 4

7 Springboard Unit 4

Read the Unit Overview on page 243

Read the Learning Focus on page 245

Unit Essential Questions

  • Why is it important to revisit, reflect on, and revise previously written texts?

  • What influences a writer’s choice during the revision process?


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