Tips on how to improve your writing

1. Tips on how to improve your writing Writing Strategy

2. What makes a good composition? Covering all points Language: fluent, coherent, high-level 3. Beautiful handwriting

3. above 20 16

4. What makes a good composition？ high-level sentence frames words

5. Learning objective： 1 升级 Sentence frames

6. 实例示范

7. 原句：The climate in Kunming is very mild and sunny, and many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery. The climate is _____ mild and sunny in Kunming ______ many tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery. So mild and sunny is the climate in Kunming thatmany tourists are attracted to enjoy its beauty and scenery. so… that … so that

8. 原句：The Americans and the British speak the same language, and they also share many customs. The Americans and the British ________ speak the same language, _________ share many customs. Not onlydo the Americans and the British speak the same language, but also share a large number of social customs. not only…but also… not only but also

9. 原句： The Americans and the British speak the same language, and they also share many customs. ___________ speaking the same language, the Americans and the British share many customs. 原句：This T-shirt is too large and doesn’t suit me. Apart from being too large, this T-shirt doesn’t suit me. 介词短语 apart from In addition to Apart from

10. 原句：When you’ve been there, you will truly experience the charm of the city. _____________ you’ve been there，will you truly experienceddefintily the charm of the city. 原句: Your English will definitely be improved, if you closely follow Jeff. Only if you closely follow Jeff, will yourEnglishdefinitely be improved. only + when/if从句倒装 Only when

11. 原句：There are many cell phones to choose from, and I have no idea which one to buy. ______ many cell phones to choose from, I have no idea which one to buy. 原句：The new iPads have arrived in Hong Kong this month, and a shopping spree(购买狂潮) will appear in mainland China soon. With the new iPads arriving in Hong Kong this month, a shopping spree will appear in mainland China soon. 介词短语 with +宾 +宾补 With

12. 原句: I saw sadness and disappointment from his face. ______ I saw from his face was sadness and disappointment. 原句: Motivation and diligence really matter in language learning. What really matters in language learning is motivation and diligence. 主语从句 what What

13. 原句: The price of gas has increased terribly, and this worries a lot of private car drivers. The price of gas has increased terribly, ______ worries a lot of private car drivers. 原句: All people know thatthe compass was first made in China. As is known to all, the compass was first made in China. 定语从句 which

14. Sentence frames 万能句式 so…that… only when/if从句 倒装 not only… but also… 2. 介词短语 with+宾+宾补、apart from 主语从句what 定语从句 Summary

15. 实战演练

16. 请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。(2006湖南卷)请根据下面的英文短诗，展开适当的想象，写一篇短文。(2006湖南卷) • 标题为：My Teacher Mr. Moore There’s a teacher Mr Moore, Who is lovely and thirty-four. Always encouraging us to try, He leads us to world of “why”. We all admire him more and more. • 注意： 1. 不得照抄短诗原文。 2. 必须结合短诗的内容，发挥想象，适当展开。 3. 必须突出短诗的主题，结构完整，语意连贯。