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Daily Language. were currently being learned the various mountain ranges in south america weve began to study the rocky mountains but we wont spend too much time with that range Corrected sentences: We’re currently being taught the various mountain ranges in South America.
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Daily Language • were currently being learned the various mountain ranges in south america • weve began to study the rocky mountains but we wont spend too much time with that range • Corrected sentences: • We’re currently being taught the various mountain ranges in South America. • 2. We’ve begun to study the Rocky Mountains, but we won’t spend too much time with that range. add period add comma add period
Daily Language 3. this here book making money could have been purchased lately but im not sure 4. the four boys were whispering between themselves noone knew that they were planning a entertaining speech • Corrected Sentences: • This book, Making Money, could have been purchased • lately, but I’m not sure. • The four boys were whispering among themselves; no one • knew that they were planning an entertaining speech.
Daily Language • franks father brought the dog home at 930AM and then he proceeded to bathe it • betty please get off of that ladder and set here • Corrected Sentences • Frank’s father brought the dog home at 9:30 A.M., and then • he proceeded to bathe it. • 2. Betty, “Please get off that ladder, and sit here.”
Daily Language • if mother is touring the west at easter shell probably stay in • mayberry hotels • 2. i went to your house yesterday to give you the short story entitled the open window • Corrected Sentences: • If Mother is touring the West at Easter, she’ll probably stay in • Mayberry Hotels. • 2. I went to your house yesterday to give you the short story • entitled “The Open Window.”
Daily Language 1. on december 2 1987 my father visited st paul to see my sister at hamline university 2. Because kay did good at school this year mom is letting her go to mexico next Fall • Corrected Sentences: • On December 2, 1987, my father visited St. Paul to see my • sister at Hamline University. • 2.Because Kay did well at school this year, Mom is letting her go • to Mexico next fall.
Daily Language • the newcastle drum and bugle corps are the better of the three marching groups • some of the different drum corps is the kilties explorers and elks i believe • The Newcastle Drum and Bugle Corps is the best of the three marching groups. • Some of the different drum corps are the Kilties, Explorers, and Elks, I believe.
Daily Language • jay never had no right to lie that book their did he • We have broke the worlds record for water skiing on lake tahoe in nevada • Corrected Sentences: • Jay (never had any or had no) right to lay that book there, did he? • We have broken the world’s record for water skiing on Lake Tahoe in Nevada.
Daily Language • mr browns and ms smiths golf scores were good they tied for first place • since joan and karen are here now they wanted to see the spanish magazine • Corrected Sentences: • Mr. Brown’s and Ms. Smith’s golf scores were good; they tied for first place. • Since Joan and Karen are here now, they want to see the Spanish magazine.
Daily Language • the group was drove to ninth avenue where they viewed the memorial day parade • because the better of t six Floats was one sponsored by the twenty first avenue club • Corrected Sentences: • The group was driven to Ninth Avenue where they viewed the Memorial Day Parade. • The best of the six floats was one sponsored by the Twenty-first Avenue Club.
Daily Language • our class sometimes go to the library to read newsweek a current events magazine • mystery theater a popular television series recently used a short story named the monkeys paw for a special Corrected Sentences: 1. Our class sometimes goes to the library to read Newsweek, a current events magazine. 2. MysteryTheater, a popular television series, recently used a short story named “The Monkey’s Paw” for a special.
Daily Language • to understand shakespeare better the students have went to see the play julius caesar • after the play kim said I didn’t think the romans fighted hard enough • Corrected Sentences: • To understand Shakespear better, the students have gone to see the play JuliusCeaser. • After the play Kim said, “I didn’t think the Romans fought hard enough.
Daily Language • irregardless of the outcome of the game I still think jim is the best of the too players • we purchased the following items a baseball a bat and some fishing equipment • Corrected Sentences: • Regardless of the outcome of the game, I still think Jim is the better of the two players. • We purchased the following items: a baseball, a bat, and some fishing equipment.
